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Discomfiture for Apple
U.S. tech goliath Apple has been forced to pay a Russian fine of 1.2 billion roubles ($13.65 million). This was because of the organization's supposed maltreatment of its prevailing business sector position and worried in-application installments, Russia's FAS antitrust office said on Monday.
By KHAGESWAR RAO K2 years ago in Critique
Original Quantum Leap vs. Quantum Leap 2023
I enjoyed both the original Quantum Leap and the new one. One criticism of the new one I disagree with is when they complain about Ben Sung travelling outside his lifetime but Sam Beckett di travel outside his lifetime on one occasion and the show explained how Ben Sung was able todo so. Also the computer would have been upgraded after 30 years. In both shows all the characters are likeable.
By Ferrari King2 years ago in Critique
WHY IS SWEDEN PREPAIRING FOR WAR?
Sweden, known for its long-standing policy of neutrality, has not engaged in any wars for the past 200 years. However, recent statements from the country's top defense officials have raised concerns among its citizens. The officials have issued warnings about the possibility of war reaching Sweden, urging residents to be prepared.
By arap kemboi2 years ago in Critique
Never Piss Off An Author (You Will End Up in Our Next Work!)
A cliché statement, yes, but true, nonetheless. It comes with the territory of watching this world turn (and burn) before my very eyes as well as your own, I’m sure of it. In my own case, I have felt story upon story begging me to be written as more events unfold, not merely in current events globally, but in the behind the scenes of said events. Never mind how such events may impact my own life—bigger things are at play and must be called out!
By Jackie Barrows2 years ago in Critique
Critique Requested: "The Kelpie"
Begging for critique! Overall, I like The Kelpie, but the opening of Part One feels rambling and completely all over the place. It needs toightening, and I'm floundering. Which bits would you cut? Is there anything that pulls you out of the story? Does it matter that I haven't named the town or village where she lives? Is that a flaw?
By L.C. Schäfer2 years ago in Critique
Catching Up!?
Catching Up to me means-- reading and reviewing several books that I have received and read, and due to the holidays, having a stomach virus with fever and a bad cold on top of that it was hard to keep up with the writing. Also, I have been having internet and computer issues as well. I have finished reading many books that I reviewed and writing in my notebooks my outlines. I have finished 98% of my household chores inside and outside, but the winds lately keep blowing leaves into piles to clean up.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
