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A Family Nobody
Does anyone out ever feel like they are a family nobody? Actually, this is about me and that is how I feel 95% of the time since moving South. My sister moved me and my mom down here to help my mom, but underneath the reason was to try and get her first daughter's now ex-husband out of the house for he was lazy and not a really nice type of person some would say two-faced most of the time. It has now been 12 years since moving down here and my mom has gone to heaven and now, I am pretty much alone.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Birthday Parties
What is a birthday? Birthday parties is how we celebrate the day that someone was born, and I know that we all know that but does the person really want to celebrate that day or would just like to be remembered on the day of their birth. We all do not like being the center of attention and I am one of those that would like just to be remembered somehow. I do not want cake or presents, but maybe a special card would be nice though. I know that I am or was a teacher and they are the center of attention in a classroom but that really is not the same as someone singing Happy Birthday to you and you really know that they really do not want to be there.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Summary of Recent Developments in the Democratic Party
### **Summary of Recent Developments in the Democratic Party** **Background:** In recent weeks, the Democratic Party has faced significant internal challenges as several prominent members have called for President Joe Biden to step down from his re-election bid. This shift in the party's dynamics is driven by concerns about Biden's impact on vulnerable Democrats in hotly-contested races. Here’s a detailed look at the current situation, based on the latest news and political analysis.
By Ceaser ZW2 years ago in Critique
Why Rich Kids Lack the Virtues of the Poor
Recently, I had a conversation with a colleague of mine. Upon conversation, the topic of our future arose. We pondered extensively on what we wanted to improve in ourselves. I wasn’t surprised by his quick response. He exclaimed that all he wanted was luxury (clothes, networking, mansions). Now, my colleague has always been a man of envy. Since we met, he has been throwing tantrums about all the sports cars and luxury brands he adores. On certain occasions, he would compare his clothes to mine. Whether it was for validation or a deep stem of insecurity is unknown. But, his overall persona is the pinnacle of consumerist ideology.
By CARLOS Alexander Guillen2 years ago in Critique
Is Corn Good For Weight Loss? Answered
Corn is a popular starchy vegetable and a fundamental ingredient in many cultural cuisines, but you might question whether corn is beneficial for weight control. Although some criticize corn for its carbohydrate levels, Corn For Weight Loss highlights that high-fiber foods like corn can slow digestion, helping you feel full more quickly and stay satiated longer.
By cisadac5322 years ago in Critique
Book reviewing
For the past few years, I have been a volunteer book reviewer for several online sites. Honestly, I was looking for a paid position to review books for say Publisher's Weekly and a few other companies, but they have never let me know one way or another. Being a book reviewer, one learns a lot and it does get lonely at times as does being a freelance writer but that does not bother me. Books are great company for me. Books are our friends.
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Cody Ko's Allegations Are really bad like bad bad.
Whenever I get to YouTube it seems that Cody Ko has been covered by some of the biggest reputable Youtube community for past days since a youtuber D'angelo wallace made a very compelling video about Cody Ko's past and this time its something that is not that positive because the kind of allegations he that has propped up is something that can really kill or end a Youtuber's career given that we have seen such examples like Dr Disrespect been dragged by the online community of his past weirdo behavior.
By Prince of kent2 years ago in Critique
Do Women Need Equitable Access to Abortion Services?. Content Warning.
The Women's Health Protection Act (WHPA) of 2023 is a significant legislative proposal aimed at ensuring consistent and equitable access to abortion services across the United States (Women's Health Protection Act [WHPA], 2023). The bill has been proposed in Congress on multiple occasions, with the latest version being H.R. 12, introduced in the 118th Congress in March 2023.
By Ally2 years ago in Critique
Many Writing Projects
Writing is a job of patience. Reading everything you can. Interesting pieces. Trying to get the words right. Intriguing for readers
By Mark Graham2 years ago in Critique
Exploring Gibson SG Standard and Blackstar St. James, the Perfect Duo
When it comes to crafting the perfect guitar sound, the choice of instrument and amplifier is crucial. Among the myriad of options available, the Gibson SG Standard and the Blackstar St. James amplifier stand out as a legendary combination. Both have earned their places in the annals of rock history, known for their distinctive tones and exceptional quality. This blog delves into the features, history, and synergy of the Gibson SG Standard and Blackstar St. James, highlighting why they are revered by musicians worldwide.
By Menard Music2 years ago in Critique
The Moonlight Carnival
Rate of availability Brings question to Wanting something for all to enjoy Needing the resources and reputation Is better than
By Seashell Harpspring 2 years ago in Critique
Agricultural revolution
*The Great Transition: From Foraging to Agriculture* Welcome to the dawn of human history, where the journey of our species takes a significant turn. In this article, we'll explore the transition from foraging to agriculture, a shift that shaped the course of our societies, cultures, and relationship with the environment.
By Ali bukhari2 years ago in Critique