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A Rainbow Story
When I see any rainbow, I am getting a visit from my mom and dad and brother. They have come for a visit even though it will probably be a short one just as long as the rainbow is bright, I close my eyes and just look for there they are smiling and waving. I say "Hi, love you, miss you." Sometimes I feel like at times I wish I could go be with them, but it is not my time and ask in a way 'When are you guys coming to pick me up.' Waiting for an answer. When?
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Over the Rainbows
What do you suppose could be at the ends of double rainbows? To me there could be anything, but I do not believe in a physical 'pot of gold', but my gold would be gaining more faith in what I believe. The pot of gold to me also means that seeing things work out personally and professionally. Some people make their wish on the pot of gold probably for more money or some physical aspect in and for their lives. For me a double rainbow means security in my faith and beliefs of who and what I am in Jesus.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Tom Turkey
Tantalizing torching the thanksgiving turkey. (Note: To all people who deep fry their turkeys on Thanksgiving. To be honest it isn't that bad, but I still like roasted turkey. I was trying to think of 't' words and 'torching' was what I thought of that is kind of like deep fry.) Share your thoughts.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Today I am Revealing the Dark Reality Behind Every Single Hollywood Movie
If you think Hollywood is just about entertainment, think again. Today, I am pulling back the curtain on the dark reality behind every single Hollywood movie. Whether it's the latest blockbuster or a seemingly innocent rom-com, the hidden agenda is always there—lingering in the background, manipulating how you think, feel, and even behave.
By Decider TVabout a year ago in Critique
Premier Rental and Property Management Services in San Antonio, Texas
San Antonio, Texas, is a thriving city known for its rich history, growing economy, and diverse population. With its many attractions, it's no surprise that demand for rental properties continues to rise. Whether you're looking for your next home or need professional assistance in managing your rental property, navigating the San Antonio rental market requires expertise, efficiency, and a deep understanding of the local real estate scene.
By San Antonio Propertyabout a year ago in Critique
Hand-Poke vs. Machine Tattoos: What’s the Difference?
Tattoos have been a form of self-expression, culture, and art for thousands of years. While modern tattoo machines are the standard in most studios today, there has been a growing resurgence in hand-poke tattoos, a method that uses no machine at all. This technique appeals to those seeking a more personal and ancient connection to the art of tattooing. But what are the real differences between hand-poke and machine tattoos?
By Berfin Orhonabout a year ago in Critique
First Page
An Anomalous white lightning fractures throughout the realm, coating an illuminated portrait onto the sands as it sweeps over a towering dune. The lightning pulsates, shining a brighter reflection on the sand’s complexion, sparkling golden halos just before the lightning’s flailing retreat.
By Noah Lichtenbergabout a year ago in Critique
Discover the Best Mount Rushmore Vacation Rentals for Your Trip
Imagine standing before the iconic faces of Mount Rushmore, a breathtaking testament to American history carved into the granite. The thrill of visiting such a monumental site is only matched by the excitement of finding the perfect place to stay nearby. Whether you're planning a family getaway, a romantic retreat, or an adventure with friends, choosing the right accommodation can enhance your experience. In this guide, we'll explore the best Mount Rushmore vacation rentals, helping you create lasting memories in this stunning region of South Dakota.
By Intothewoodsblackhillsabout a year ago in Critique
Is Everything a Test?
Reading Rick Warren's book 'A Purpose Driven Life' at the end of Chapter five there is a question--What has happened to me really has only been a test? Then when someone who probably does not even realize how they stated some words about me doesn't realize through my actions that I have shown really seems not to matter even though I was taught when certain words were uttered in haste were what that person really meant. I still find it hard to be around the person that said what was said. I do send smiles and heart emojis to them.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
My Purpose, I think...
What is my purpose? I am re-reading Rick Warren's 'The Purpose-Driven Life' for the third time. It hit me in Chapter four my purpose is writing for I worked as a nurse and even a teacher I feel more that I am fulfilling my purpose as a writer. Through writing I am sharing what I have learned and what I am learning. I know when I die even though I feel like I will still be down here on Earth trying to guide others somehow I know God and Jesus is with me in all I am here one Earth.
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique











