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A Rainbow Story

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By Mark GrahamPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Rainbow over water (pexels.com)

When I see any rainbow, I am getting a visit from my mom and dad and brother. They have come for a visit even though it will probably be a short one just as long as the rainbow is bright, I close my eyes and just look for there they are smiling and waving. I say "Hi, love you, miss you." Sometimes I feel like at times I wish I could go be with them, but it is not my time and ask in a way 'When are you guys coming to pick me up.' Waiting for an answer. When?

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Mark Graham

I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.

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  • Testabout a year ago

    i love this piece

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Yeah we never know when. I just lost my last brother….

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Sending a heartfelt hug with the next rainbow you encounter. This is so heartfelt and so lovely, Mark.

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