Full of wandering
Plenty of hugs abound with
Babies are family.
(Here is another haiku. Again, I feel that maybe the word 'hugs' is either one or two syllables. 'Family' is two syllables to me. I divided 'fam/ily' like this making it two syllables or could be three 'fam/i/ly'. 'Wan/der/ing' like this giving three syllables. Please comment it will be greatly appreciated.)
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Comments (2)
Good for you for continuing the Haiku! 💖 I love babies! My favorites are grandbabies and great-grandbabies! The husband has a rule that we don't keep babies overnight that aren't trained! 😂 Love that one, I wouldn't have thought of that on my own!😂
Sweet haiku. 'Hugs' is actually one syllable while 'family' is 3 syllables. You're doing well overall! If you google a word in the Merriam Webster Dictionary, it will tell you how many syllables if you aren't sure. Hope this helps.