Hey, eyes wide open
vision clear not blurry now
Windows to a view.
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A window down low
Go down and look up and open
For a different view.
(Here are two haikus about windows. In the second one the word 'different' I think is two syllables. In the first not sure if 'blurry' is one or two syllables. I know I should put these in POETS, but I am critiquing my own work.)
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Mark Graham
I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.
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Thunderstorm
Dark clouds are brewing Winds at high speeds now howling Thunderstorms to engage. (One last haiku for tonight. I think they are getting a little better, I hope. My inspiration for this one was I was hearing thunder outside as well as the dark, gray clouds and sky. Please comment if you want to.)
By Mark Grahamabout a year ago in Critique
Standing While Falling
Quotation from Friedrich Nietzsche "He who wrestles long with monsters should beware lest he himself become a monster. And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Man is not destroyed by suffering, but by the meaning he makes of it."
By LUCCIAN LAYTH10 days ago in Critique
The African Diaspora and History of Rhetoric: Learning to Learn
When studying the history of rhetoric, many groups were excluded from participating in power and were used, abused, and written off as inferior. Even today African nations have not recovered from being exploited by European powers.
By WILD WAYNE : The Dragon Kinga day ago in Critique
Comments (2)
Feedback: 1st one 5-7-5!! 🥰 2nd one 5-8-6.
For a different view, I especially loved that! Amazing Haikus!