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The Fifth Key

The Midnight Garden

By Hussein GazoPublished 3 months ago 4 min read

The rain was a cold, relentless drumbeat on the window of the interrogation room. Detective Elias Thorne, a man whose face was a roadmap of sleepless nights, watched the suspect across the table. Sarah Vance, a retired librarian in her late sixties, was knitting a lavender scarf, her needles clicking with unnerving calmness. She was the prime, and only, suspect in the murder of her neighbor, Mr. Arthur Finch.

Finch had been found in his sealed study, dead from a single, precise knife wound. No forced entry. No struggle. Just a silent murder scene that smelled faintly of old parchment and cinnamon.

"Mrs. Vance," Thorne started, his voice a low rumble. "We know you were the last person to see Mr. Finch alive. You admit to visiting him for tea at 4:00 PM."

Sarah didn't look up. "He made the best Earl Grey. We discussed the local history society's annual budget. Nothing more."

"And when you left?"

"I locked the door behind me. I had one of the four known keys to his house."

This was the core of the riddle. Finch was obsessed with security. His housekeeper, his lawyer, his gardener, and Sarah Vance—all held keys. The housekeeper was out of town. The lawyer had an iron-clad alibi across the city. The gardener, a gentle giant named Ben, was under surveillance and cleared. Only Sarah was left.

"Yet, the study where Mr. Finch was killed was locked from the inside," Thorne pressed. "The window was sealed. The key was in the pocket of his pajamas. How did the killer get out?"

Sarah finally paused her knitting, resting the needles on the table. She looked at Thorne, her eyes a startling blue. "Maybe he wasn't planning on leaving, Detective."

Thorne ignored the chilling comment. "We searched the room. We searched the house. We found no secret passages, no second way out."

He leaned forward, lowering his voice. "We found one oddity, Mrs. Vance. A small, tarnished silver key tucked beneath the oriental rug in the hallway. It didn't fit any lock we have on file for the Finch property. What is it for?"

A tiny, almost imperceptible smile played on the librarian's lips. "Mr. Finch was a collector of secrets, Detective. He often spoke of a fifth key. He never said what it opened, just that it was the 'key to the past,' and that he kept it hidden where only a devoted scholar would look."

Thorne pushed the silver key across the table. "You knew where he kept it. You went there often. What does it open, Sarah?"

She picked up her knitting, and the rhythmic clicking resumed. "It opens nothing, Detective. It is the secret."

The Revelation (A Jump of 200 words)

Thorne stood up, the chair scraping the floor. He knew the 'fifth key' wasn't just some symbolic trinket. He walked out, heading back to the crime scene, ignoring the rain.

He re-entered the sealed study. The faint smell of cinnamon was still there. He mentally reviewed the key elements: locked from the inside, a collector of secrets, Sarah Vance's odd choice of words ("a devoted scholar").

The only thing a devoted scholar would cherish more than a key is a book.

Thorne started pulling every volume from the shelf, frantically searching for any loose pages or hidden compartments. He stopped at a massive, leather-bound edition of Plato's Republic. He noticed the book was slightly wider than its neighbors. He opened it, not to the pages, but to the spine.

The silver key he found in the hallway wasn't a key to a door, but a custom-made winding key for a specific mechanism.

He slotted the key into a nearly invisible hole he found at the base of the book's spine and turned it slowly. A soft click echoed. The entire back panel of the bookcase silently slid open, revealing a narrow, dust-filled passage that led directly to the small potting shed in the gardener's backyard.

The gardener, Ben, the gentle giant, was cleared because he was under surveillance after the murder. Finch’s killer hadn’t planned on a grand escape; they had built a secret, concealed route, knowing Finch's obsession with hiding the 'fifth key' would keep their exit a secret.

Thorne returned to the station, the scent of cinnamon now overpowering in his memory. It wasn't the smell of a book, but of a rare, imported cinnamon tea—the same tea Sarah Vance claimed Finch had made for her. The perfect cover for her frequent, unsupervised visits to access the bookcase and maintain her secret route.

He burst back into the interrogation room. Sarah Vance’s needles were clicking rapidly, but her eyes held a spark of terror.

"The passage to the shed," Thorne whispered. "It was you and the gardener, wasn't it? He dug the tunnel, you provided the key to the release mechanism. The 'fifth key' was the final piece of the puzzle."

Sarah dropped her knitting. The lavender scarf lay unfinished on the floor. Her years of calm composure finally broke.

"He was going to sell his entire collection," she choked out. "The secrets belonged to the society. They belonged to me!"

The rain outside finally stopped. The cold drumbeat was over. The riddle of the locked room was solved by the one thing Mr. Finch had truly loved: a secret mechanism hidden inside a book.

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About the Creator

Hussein Gazo

Hi im Hussien

im a writer from Jordan

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