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Mafioso

A Detective’s Fight to Expose the Shadows of Power

By Jason “Jay” BenskinPublished 12 months ago Updated 12 months ago 3 min read
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The docks at midnight were a graveyard of shadows. Crates stacked like tombstones loomed over the cold, black water, and the faint hum of distant engines provided a haunting soundtrack. Detective Luca Moretti adjusted his coat against the biting wind, his eyes scanning the darkness. He wasn’t supposed to be here, but he had spent the last three years chasing the elusive whispers of the Vescari crime family. Tonight, those whispers promised to become screams.

A tip from an anonymous source had brought him to Pier 21, where a clandestine meeting of the Vescari underbosses was supposedly taking place. Luca had heard it all before—rumors, half-truths, and dead ends. But this time felt different. This time, the echoes of the Mafia seemed ready to reveal their secrets.

Hiding behind a stack of crates, Luca peered out at the scene unfolding below. Five men stood in a loose circle, their faces partially obscured by the glow of a single hanging bulb. At the center was Antonio "The Jackal" Vescari, a name that sent shivers down the spines of even the toughest cops.

Luca’s breath hitched. Antonio wasn’t just the underboss; he was the architect of the Vescari empire. Extortion, racketeering, murder—his hands were stained with crimes that spanned decades. For years, Antonio had evaded justice, protected by an iron wall of loyalty and fear.

The men exchanged briefcases, their movements smooth and practiced. Luca strained to hear their conversation, catching fragments of words—shipments, payments, alliances. He pulled out his camera, snapping photos as quietly as he could.

Then, the sound of a gun cocking froze him in place.

“Well, well,” came a gravelly voice behind him. “Looks like we’ve got ourselves a snoop.”

Luca turned slowly, his heart pounding. A thug with a scar across his jaw stood a few feet away, aiming a revolver at Luca's chest. Before he could react, two more men emerged from the shadows, their faces twisted into cruel smirks.

“Detective Moretti,” Antonio’s voice called from below. It was smooth, almost cordial, but laced with menace. “Why don’t you join us? No need to skulk in the dark like a rat.”

The thugs grabbed Luca and dragged him into the circle of light. Antonio’s piercing blue eyes studied him with a mixture of amusement and curiosity.

“Always knew you’d be a problem,” Antonio said, lighting a cigar. “You’ve been sniffing around my business for years. Admirable, but foolish.”

Luca clenched his jaw, refusing to show fear. “Your business is ruining lives, Antonio. Someone has to stop you.”

Antonio chuckled, a deep, menacing sound. “Ruining lives? No, Detective. I’m providing order in a chaotic world. Protection, stability, opportunities—things your precious justice system can’t offer.”

“You call murder and extortion stability?” Luca shot back.

The other men shifted uneasily, their hands hovering near their weapons. Antonio held up a hand, silencing them.

“I like you, Detective,” he said. “You’ve got fire. But fire burns out quickly in a storm, and you’re caught in one now.”

Antonio gestured, and one of the thugs handed him a silenced pistol. He examined it thoughtfully, his gaze never leaving Luca’s.

“You see, the Mafia isn’t just a family—it’s an idea,” Antonio continued. “Even if you kill me, someone else will rise. The echoes of what we’ve built will never fade.”

Luca’s mind raced. His backup was miles away, and his chances of escape were slim. But then he noticed the faint glint of his camera, still strapped around his neck. The photos he’d taken could be his lifeline.

Summoning his courage, Luca said, “Maybe you’re right. Maybe the Mafia’s legacy will live on. But so will your crimes. I’ve got enough evidence to bury you and your whole operation.”

Antonio’s expression darkened. He stepped closer, the pistol now aimed at Luca’s forehead.

“You’re bluffing,” Antonio said, but there was a flicker of doubt in his eyes.

Luca smirked. “Try me.”

A tense silence filled the air. Then, in the distance, the wail of sirens broke the stalemate. Antonio’s men exchanged panicked glances.

“Time to go,” Antonio growled, lowering the gun.

The thugs released Luca, and within moments, the group melted into the shadows. Luca sank to his knees, relief washing over him.

As the police cars screeched to a halt, Luca clutched his camera tightly. He might not have stopped the Mafia tonight, but he’d captured their secrets. The echoes of the Mafia would no longer haunt the shadows—they would face the light.

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About the Creator

Jason “Jay” Benskin

Crafting authored passion in fiction, horror fiction, and poems.

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  • JBaz12 months ago

    Well done, nice tightly written suspense. And we learned our characters quickly.

  • Mark Graham12 months ago

    This is quite the thriller you have here. I was on the edge of my seat. Good job

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