Critique
The Big Deep
I’m a miner. I dig holes for a living. ‘Dig’ is a generous word, really. I blow things up so we can go deeper. Drill, charge, blast then bog it out. Then repeat. It’s loud, dirty, and dangerous. But it’s honest work, and there’s a rhythm to it, one that makes sense. Until the day it didn’t The mine is called Kalgara Deep, carved beneath the sun-blasted hills of Western Australia, three hours from the nearest servo, and six from anything you could call a town. It’s not on any tourist map. Just a dot behind a red dirt road lined with scrub and...
By Javed khan 6 months ago in Art
The Sparrow and the Fox: A Quest for the Golden Grain. AI-Generated.
In a lush forest, Sparrow, a tiny bird with shimmering wings, fluttered anxiously. Winter was near, and his food stash was dangerously low. Meanwhile, Fox, a clever creature with a bushy tail, faced the same problem—his hunts had yielded little. One frosty morning, Sparrow spotted a rumor on the wind: a single stalk of golden grain, bursting with seeds, grew deep in the Whispering Valley, guarded by thorny vines and a rushing river.
By Omar Mohammed 6 months ago in Art
The Quest for the Lost Ring. AI-Generated.
In the heart of the ocean, aboard the ancient ship Star of Almeria, two young adventurers, Laila and Karim, embarked on a daring quest. The ship, a creaking relic of a bygone era, was rumored to hold a priceless treasure: a golden ring encrusted with a sapphire that glowed under moonlight, said to grant wisdom to its wearer.
By Omar Mohammed 6 months ago in Art
The Old Man and the Elephant. AI-Generated.
One dusty afternoon, an old man named Salem hobbled along a narrow desert path, leaning on his cane. His weathered face told stories of a long life. Suddenly, a massive elephant lumbered toward him, its trunk swaying gently. Salem froze, heart racing, as the beast’s shadow loomed large.
By Omar Mohammed 6 months ago in Art







