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Please by Jenne Lee Neil

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By Jenne NeilPublished 3 months ago 2 min read

“Please”

By jenne Lee Neil

12/2023

“Pls

Pls

Pls “

Would anyone just listen to me.

I’m not just talking.

Because I need to be seen

You could be a pirate, or you could be a peasant you could be the pallbearer or you could be the

ground you rest in

Sometimes I don’t care anymore!!!!!

but

there’s one thing that you can’t ignore.

There’s a season for every feeling’

and weather it is summer, spring, winter or fall…..

God loves me.

That’s all that I can recall.

For one thing, I know for sure that when you knock on that heavenly door,

YOU

will look your maker in the eyes,

and I hope that in there there’s no disguise.. or disgust… or despair….

He only gave you like , 1 billion breaths of air

And what you did with them ???

well that’s your that’s your choice.

But

I promise you you will tremble

When you hear

His voice

Say to you…

what have you done with all of them ?

And all of your time?

Did you love also ?

or

did you put them in a bind ?

Because there is no you.

and

there is no me.

It is a collective consciousness that we will be.

God is growing us from just a little seed.

Oh my God!!!!

How lucky are we ??

To be made in his image, but we’re just a seed.

And I can’t understand, we think “it’s like all ……

we need to do is breed.?”

No

Bc

we need to grow !

and we need to show,

each other our love because that’s all I know.

Because I am you and you are me.

And

If you’re lucky, there are three things that you can trust….

Your daddy….

your doggies……

and your truck.

They’ll get you from point A to point B

but the journey is the point

and it’s all about what you see

and what you see

and what you love and how you treat it, and each little hug. :)

Bc

We’re born alone, and we die alone and when we meet him,

I hope it feels like home :)

because we cannot spare any love;

because he did not spare any for us,

Man just saying that makes me feel like

I just got hit by a bus

And in these

Times;

it’s so easy,

it’s almost like it’s by design….

We swipe left.

We swipe right.

We never look in the mirror because we’re aaaaaaaaaaaaslways right!!!

We never say we’re sorry tho..:because who could be?

I always let YOUR ego get the best of me!!?!

But I won’t let them change me

No, sir, no way !!!!!!

I’ll fight fight fight !!!!

I will not go calmly into that good night.

I’ll rage! rage rage rage rage!!!! within my own light

because

I was born alone,

and

Idk

I just might die tonight ?

With an attitude of gratitude

I share this last piece with you,

We cannot consider or contemplate all that our God has gone through….

To make us who we are ??

to make US shine?

to give us his image!!!

and the divine.!!!????????

So why don’t we treat each other a little more kind?

Wink at that stranger !

smile , shine your light :-) !!!

And

Seriously; look people in the eyes

and don’t give them a fright.

What you do to me ?

Is

what you do to yourself

SO

“God bless you and

God bless your health.”

Jenne bear neil

Inspiration

About the Creator

Jenne Neil

Texas girl loves singing and writing and making art

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