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Rommi's Top Stories

With a Note on Reciprocal Reads

By C. Rommial ButlerPublished 9 months ago โ€ข Updated about a month ago โ€ข 4 min read
Perseus and Andromeda by Titian. We are all "damsels in distress", our own "hero", and our own "monster". We all get by "with a little help from our friends" but the onus and ability remains for us to save our selves.

Well...

I want to open this pillar post by admitting that we're all tied to the pillar, in a manner of speaking. Each of us, I hope, has something in our life that is more important than writing. Or, perhaps, many things. This is the pillar to which our work is tied. Chained, even. Me, I wouldn't have it otherwise, as I explained in the Rommentary to my song On Your Way.

I started publishing on Vocal in October of 2021. Going on four years! When I first came here, we didn't have comment sections, but there were a lot of good folks, many of whom are still here, networking on Meta/facebook, trying to get some action going for each other.

I respect that a lot, but as an asocial person with time-consuming responsibilities besides, networking has always been a burden for me, which draws away from the quality and quantity of my work (more on this in the Rommentary to my top story Scattered Thoughts, Like Rain, which you'll find below in the Poetry section).

This doesn't seem to be the case for most folks. Networking seems to make many of you better writers, and I've no qualms with that. I've absolutely enjoyed watching writers grow on this platform. But for me, some measure of solitude is, also absolutely, required.

This is why reciprocal reads are so important to me. If you read my work, I will read yours--provided, of course, that you don't come across as a robot, a scammer, or just plain disingenuous.

I also peek at the feed, every once in a while, and select someone I've never read before so I can expand, little by little, my subscription list. But there's no way I can get to everyone on it all the time, so I tend to gravitate back to those with whom I've already developed a rapport... or with whom, at the very least, I have rapped.

On that note, some folks might think I'm out here handing out many a "Well-wrought!" like candy just to lure you my way.

I'm not. Sometimes I read work from folks who do not reciprocate as often as I read. I'm not expecting an exact tit-for-tat, but doing what I can in the time I have.

Then there are alternate examples, the most obvious of which would be dear Dharrsheena (find her work here), who reads so much more than she writes. I've genuinely enjoyed reading her work, and am always delighted and excited when she comments and I see something new on her profile.

The quality of the work I read here varies, but the quality of the people who hold my attention by putting in the work to improve (hence the screenshot of the definition above) and also graciously taking the time to read my own, is stellar, and I am thankful for that, dear reader.

What's most important is not that we are the best in every instance, but that we are sincere in our efforts to show the world the little part of our soul which completes the whole, for better or worse.

Not everyone does this through writing, of course.

Our work in the world is naturally best when it suits our innate capabilities; but it is not for me to decide what that means for another.

Such is their journey, and should we cross paths, my best practice must be to encourage them on their own before I go my way, though this does not mean we won't cross paths again!

Time, once spent, is never regained. Time, therefore, is not money, as the old saying goes, for money cannot replace it or buy it back.

Those important things in my life--that pillar to which I am chained--take precedent over social networking, as does writing. Writing is the way I process life, and it helps me to sort through those important things.

I wrote my first short story in grade one. It was a page long, on that gray paper with the wide dotted lines, so it was really just a paragraph. It's in a chest somewhere in the mess of memories my dearly departed mother left me, but without searching it out, I can recall it was about a superhero dog who shot basketballs from his paws.

I was told by multiple adults who knew me since I was born that I was speaking full sentences by one and having dialogues with them by the time I was five, so obviously, I'm not antisocial.

My pop once remarked (perhaps euphemistically) that I had the "gift of gab".

My creative impulse consumes me. I have a smartphone now, in which I can write anything at a moment's notice. But I used to carry a pen and a little notebook around with me everywhere, madly dashing the whirlwind of my thoughts onto the paper like a tweaked splatterpainter attacking a canvas.

One such example! Can you can decipher my poor pennmanship?

Absent my notebook--which my absent-mind would every so often forget to grab--I would scribble on napkins, scrap paper, cardboard, fabric, or myself, if necessary, to keep an idea.

I also left a lot of doggerel on bathroom stalls and white-painted walls. The statute of limitations having passed, I hope, for such meager youthful offenses, I am willing to admit it, though I am neither proud nor ashamed.

So without further ado, below are my top stories, organized by form, with two addendums:

It is all, in some way or another, Philosophy.

I created a third category for The ShambElla Saga, which is finished, and which I hope you will take the time to read in its entirety. Even so, those individual stories, I think, are accessible, even out of context.

I will be organizing them from most to least recent.

Poetry:

Prose:

The ShambElla Saga (this will be from least to most recent):

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About the Creator

C. Rommial Butler

C. Rommial Butler is a writer, musician and philosopher from Indianapolis, IN. His works can be found online through multiple streaming services and booksellers.

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  • Elena Margaret9 months ago

    this is very good poem list.

  • L.C. Schรคfer9 months ago

    An impressive catalogue. I was told I had the gift of the gab as well. When I told my teachers I'd been to Ireland during the holidays and kissed the Blarney Stone, they went, "gawd help us". ๐Ÿ˜ฌ

  • D.K. Shepard9 months ago

    A wonderful read, Rommi! Definitely on the same page as you in terms of reciprocity! Thereโ€™s so many talented writers on this platform and only so much time to read! Therefore Iโ€™ll gravitate toward the people I enjoy reading who I can also build rapport with! Love your recollection about your first story! I had a similar experience that came to mind of those wide dotted lines! Mine was about a butterfly. Kind of lame compared to a dog who can shoot basketballs! Haha! Anyways, what an impressive list of Top Stories!

  • Awww Rommi, that was so sweet of you to mention me, thank you ๐Ÿฅนโค๏ธ I joined Vocal four months after you hehehe and they still didn't have comments. I think they only had after three months of me joining. Whoaaaaa, that dog can shoot basketball from his paws?! That's soooo cool! And yes, I could decipher your handwriting and these were lovely lines! Congratulations again on all your Top Stories! ๐ŸŽ‰๐Ÿ’–๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰๐Ÿ’–๐ŸŽŠ I miss Colt, hope to see him soon hehehehhee

  • Lamar Wiggins9 months ago

    Echoing some of the comments, your musings always give pause to really soak up the philosophy behind the deep thoughts. There was a time I studied meta-physics on my own. I'm not surprised to see some of those beliefs come through in your work. Always a pleasure to engage in the thoughts of Rommi!

  • John Cox9 months ago

    Sounds like you were precocious from jumpstreet, Rommi! Love reading your work and happy to see you posting after your break. Hope your travels and visits were fruitful!

  • Mother Combs9 months ago

    ๐ŸŒนSome wonderful stories here, Charles <3

  • Jay Kantor9 months ago

    'Sup Cr - What a brilliant-unique perspective of your offerings - that's why I always tune into you other than the naked ladies, of course. Coincidence: I revised with our Kristen, "The Llama & Koala" the only A+ I ever got in 'BoneHeadEnglish..! j.bud.in.l.a.

  • Mark Graham9 months ago

    Your first-grade story is a great one, and your writing as is still impeccable and I really like reading your work. Keep writing for I learn a lot from your work as well as others here.

  • Cathy holmes9 months ago

    Time is not money "for money cannot replace it or buy it back." So true. And a superhero basketball shooting dog? How cool!

  • Antoni De'Leon9 months ago

    I have met your writing, you have a gift for prose. From very early, i see. I am always pleased when a writer I admire read a few of my works. You do. Thanks. That is a lot to read, will I ever get to them all. Sure will try. So much truth in this article. That was a deep poem for a child...you been blessed from an early age.

  • Rachel Deeming9 months ago

    Have we rapped? And a dog who shoots basketballs from his paws? What a place to start a writing career! Really pleased that you're getting voluminous praise from Dr. Jason Benskin too. That will surely bolster an otherwise saggy, unassuming day.

  • Nice work! ๐ŸŽ‰ This post on the article is impressive writing โœ๏ธ, keep it up ๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿ”ฅ! I would like to personal invite you to my Horror Prompt Challenge: https://shopping-feedback.today/horror/horror-story-prompt-challenge-the-last-command%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E ๐ŸŽƒ๐Ÿ’€Hope you join

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