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AbrakhsSufiCore: The Inner Journey to Allah

“The heart’s secret dialogue with Allah.”

By abrakhsPublished 10 months ago 3 min read

In the vast silence of the desert, where time moved like dust in the wind, a man named Abrakhs walked alone beneath the stars.

He wasn’t running from the world—he was running toward something deeper. Something he could not yet name. The city he left behind still echoed in his thoughts: the noise, the desires, the lies he told himself just to survive. But now, in the wide stillness of the night, only his footsteps and the whispering wind accompanied him.

He had no destination—only a direction. Every grain of sand beneath his feet reminded him of how small he was, yet how infinite the journey ahead could be.

Abrakhs was not a scholar. He was not a saint. He was only a man whose heart had become heavy—heavy with sins, with longing, with confusion. And somewhere deep inside, he had begun to feel that the heart was not created just to beat—it was created to speak. Not out loud, but inwardly. To whisper, cry, plead, and remember the One who created it.

And so, he walked.

By day, the heat would test his patience. By night, the cold would test his strength. But neither hurt him more than the weight in his chest—a soul thirsty for nearness to its Lord.

One night, after days of walking, Abrakhs stopped by a cluster of stones and laid down beneath the open sky. The stars above looked like tears frozen in place. He closed his eyes and whispered:

“Ya Allah… I am not worthy of Your closeness. But I can no longer survive far from You.”

There was no reply. Just silence. But that silence felt different—it wasn’t empty. It was full. Full of presence. Full of mercy. It was as if the silence was listening.

He continued:

“I have lived a life of veils. I have followed my ego, clothed myself in pride, and drowned in desires. But now, all I ask is that You allow my heart to speak to You again. Even if only in broken words.”

Tears escaped his eyes—not because of pain, but because of something sweeter: the first taste of truth. That night, the heart of Abrakhs began its secret dialogue with Allah.

No sound. No language. Just pure presence. A knowing. A turning.

He remembered a line he had once heard from a Sufi elder:
"When the heart turns to Allah, even the winds carry its prayers."

From that moment, his journey changed.

He stopped walking for miles and started walking within. Every heartbeat became a step. Every breath became a dhikr. Every moment alone became a doorway to the Divine. And in the stillness of solitude, he realized something beautiful:

The heart doesn’t speak through noise. It speaks through sincerity.

Days passed. Nights passed. The desert began to feel like a friend. And one morning, while standing atop a dune as the sun rose like gold behind the horizon, Abrakhs whispered the words:

“You were never far. I was just turned away.”

He thought back on his past mistakes—but this time, not with shame. With gratitude. Because every darkness he faced had led him to this dawn. Every fall was a signpost back to the Beloved. Every tear had watered the seed of yearning within him.

His heart whispered again:

“O Allah… I don’t seek a high place in the world. I seek a low place at Your door.”

And he felt it.

Not a voice, not a sound—but a calm that wrapped itself around him like light. A mercy that could not be explained, only felt. A closeness that made the sky feel like a dome of intimacy and the ground like a prayer mat.

The journey had not ended—but it had found its direction.

Abrakhs would return to the world someday. But not as the man who left. He would return with a heart alive. A soul softened. A tongue that remembered. A presence that carried Sakīna—the peace that only Allah gives to those who seek Him sincerely.

He would carry the light of that inner journey wherever he went.

And though no one would see the desert in his footsteps, or hear the winds that once listened to his prayers, his heart would always carry that secret dialogue. Not just in silence, but in every glance, every smile, every prostration.

Because once the heart speaks to Allah…
It never forgets






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