You Tend the Soil of My Being
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Now, I’m seeing,
that you tend the soil of my being.
When all I see is dirt and dust,
you see beauty, not rust.
You are walking with me in the garden of purpose and good tidings,
spiritual workings and miracles, there are continuous sightings!
You rake the leaves of my burdens and pile them up to burn them.
You raise your arms in a victory sign and you call it my win.
You remind me of all the things you have bestowed upon me.
With such reassurance, I feel confident, knowing I am everything you have called me to be.
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Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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Comments (9)
It is truly wonderful to feel that powerful support and to know you are walking in purpose.
You rake the leaves of my burdens is such a comforting image. This whole piece breathes renewal.
That is such an awesome title for a poem! Great job, Rowan!
this is gorgeous
Really loved this one! 🌱 It’s so gentle and uplifting! Kinda feels like a warm hand on your shoulder reminding you you’re blooming even when you don’t see it yet.
I love how you always intertwine nature into your work. You are living a mission of love and light! You're a great friend, surrounded by those who love and support you. This poem reminds me of simple moments that leave impactful memories and subtle reminders. :) Great job as always
In my fieldwork, I’ve discovered a quiet elegance in the soil. Today, it was the subtle layers, stacked over thousands of years, that hid artifacts the world forgot.
"You rake the leaves of my burdens and pile them up to burn them." There's nothing like a good bonfire to warm the soul 🔥😇❤️
This poem is full of hope and reassurance. A great reminder that we're not alone!