You May Have Not Thought of This Before
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Quite a quick wonder
Hummingbirds, lovemaking, sweet
Until thunder boom
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Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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Once again you are proving brother, liked it.
Excellent piece, from a bird lover
Oh we rarely have thunder so not sure because we have hummingbirds in our yard and feeders.