Gently sanding her arm and frail hand
Over hospital bed, I stand
Humming because it fills space
Watching neck pulse and face
Clearly, homeward bound
Life strength, makes proud
She is close
To the
End
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Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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Excellent poem
That sadness sharpens your poetry talent.
Incredible poem
😩😩😩😩 So well done, poignant, sad, and hard to think of.