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You Make My Violin Cry

My violin cries for my out of tuned wife

By Marie381Uk Published 5 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

You Make My Violin Cry

You make my violin cry

strings break under your touch

notes bleed across the room

every sound is pain

you dishonest bitch

you smiled while you cut me

you kissed while you lied

you held me only to drop me

the bow shakes

the song dies

the silence after is worse

you make my violin cry

and all I hear is you

you made my violin cry

you self centred

selfish flat noted bitch.

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Irfan Ali5 months ago

    🎻 Raw, unfiltered, and brutally honest — this poem bleeds emotion like the strings of a broken violin. The mix of tenderness and rage makes it both painful and powerful, almost like a song that refuses to be silenced. It’s jagged, it’s messy, but that’s what makes it so real.

  • Strong words but very descriptive, thankyou for sharing xx

  • Vicious, excellent words

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