Plunging deep into your waters
Breathing in the mist of you
Taking on your surge of power
Fresh and crisp, as morning dew
Heading safely to your islands
To your warm, welcoming shores
In the capsule, of your passage
Im the boat, and you’re my oars
You, the dream
And I, the dreamer
Longing together, just once more
To be held safe, content and happy
Know what desire on my lips are for
So long I’ve waited to be closer
To touch your face, dive in your eyes
And swim in loves unending fountain
Away from secrets, pain or lies
Come closer, please, I cannot reach you,
the distance far, the hope is long
My body aches to feel you near me
Back in my arms, where you belong
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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Comments (9)
I can't tell if it's from an unrequited lover, a lover that's been let go and has not yet returned, or one that has crossed the veil of this world into the next. It sort of has a few Titanic vibes to it as well. Nice work, Kelli.
Very loving poem
Beautiful piece. Well done
Loving this!!! 💕💖😊
Love this ❤️I could feel that yearning she proclaimed...
Love this.
Oh, this is so gorgeous. The longing is palpable.❤️
I could feel the longing!! Beautifully written :) Loved the line, 'I'm the boat, and you're my oars'
Very nice kelli 👍