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Just A Dream

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
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Plunging deep into your waters

Breathing in the mist of you

Taking on your surge of power

Fresh and crisp, as morning dew

Heading safely to your islands

To your warm, welcoming shores

In the capsule, of your passage

Im the boat, and you’re my oars

You, the dream

And I, the dreamer

Longing together, just once more

To be held safe, content and happy

Know what desire on my lips are for

So long I’ve waited to be closer

To touch your face, dive in your eyes

And swim in loves unending fountain

Away from secrets, pain or lies

Come closer, please, I cannot reach you,

the distance far, the hope is long

My body aches to feel you near me

Back in my arms, where you belong

sad poetry

About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Thavien Yliaster3 years ago

    I can't tell if it's from an unrequited lover, a lover that's been let go and has not yet returned, or one that has crossed the veil of this world into the next. It sort of has a few Titanic vibes to it as well. Nice work, Kelli.

  • Very loving poem

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Beautiful piece. Well done

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Loving this!!! 💕💖😊

  • Love this ❤️I could feel that yearning she proclaimed...

  • Joe Patterson3 years ago

    Love this.

  • sleepy drafts3 years ago

    Oh, this is so gorgeous. The longing is palpable.❤️

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    I could feel the longing!! Beautifully written :) Loved the line, 'I'm the boat, and you're my oars'

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