I’m writing and reading
Reading and writing
But still, no one sees me
Just focus on the joy writing brings me
It makes my mind feel so free
In the end its just a hobby
That's sometimes pays me
But at times it pains me
I'm reading and writing
Writing and reading
Hoping someone sees me
Thank you for reading!
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Hey, I'm Emily! Thanks for reading. Hope you read something that inspires you. Or something that you find relatable.
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Mind underwater
The Mind Underwater The ground didn’t just stop me. It swallowed me. Impact wasn’t a moment — it was a breach. The brightness collapsed, the air thinned, and before I could brace, the world gave way beneath me. I didn’t land on the ground. I fell through it.
By Elisa Wontorcik2 days ago in Poets
Comments (4)
Hehehe ... wow, so cool! Keep writing. 😇
🫂hugs, Emily
This is quietly powerful! I can feel the ache and the joy of the craft in just a few heartfelt lines.💖
Going up again. 😅 I see you!