Why Nothing Rhymes With Orange
A poem that got me in trouble

an easy breakfast
a simple affair
no additional ingredients
or garnish to prepare
just knife and plate on table
essentially quite bare
but ahh that first slice
hypnotic…
begs time to stop and stare
cuz lusciousness has a name
golden and glistening like the sun
that heals the distance in between
beholden and listening out for one
to pause before it's moisture
to gaze full breadth inside its flesh
honor gestation of its juicy
intention captured and then express
those radiant beacons born to bask
make lips and tongue beggars too polite to ask
to lick and bite and suck—not mask
moans of pleasure over dripping task
that won't have you guessing
hydrates and vibrates vitamin C
yes a blessing
can hear you also as priest
should you need to be confessing
‘bout multiplying sweetness
that teases taste buds
and says “to hell” with standard neatness
go all in and relish
these moments
‘ere soon they end
in decadent citrus wanton
as you sip and swallow in a haze
a fruit discovered your heart beats orange
so now
near your pulse it sways
supposed to be a basic breakfast
that would only take a minute
‘til unexpected ecstasy swept down
and *slurrrp* exceeding joyous to be in it

Author's Note: - Some delicious and decadent pleasures are purely that and nothing else.
Some elements of society sexualize anything and everything to make you out to be some kind of pervert. I love me some sex but "some elements" will miss out a great deal on the simple pleasures of a juicy orange without being puritanical obnoxious deviants.
Confession: - It is worth noting that I've had friends who have been puritanical obnoxious deviants.
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Comments (10)
Both can be sensuous, and a lot of people can't handle sensuality without it being about sex. When all you've got is a hammer, everything looks like it's gonna get nailed... or something. 😁
That was an amazing poem.
Great words and I love decadence and deviance and I can find los of words that rhyme with Orange (nearly)
Haha I love this so much. And I love your little disclaimer at the end. I am often a puritanical obnoxious deviant.
I’m such a huge fan of yours! The formatting, choice of words, wide-ranging vocabulary, and your insight is so inspiring.
Well that was simply delicious.
As you know, I'm a vegetarian. But I don't like fruits hahahahaha. I only like bananas, watermelon and mangoes. Nothing other than that and orange is what I don't like the most 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Butttttt, with that being said, I loveeeeee your poem!
I love how you described the way the juiciness of the orange is experienced by the person eating it instead of just using the word "juicy". The descriptions aren't too purple and aren't too simple, which is what makes this poem great.
BAM!!! Dynomite!!! Magnificently written!!! Love it!!!♥♥♥
Wow Wow Wow. So creative especially the title. Very well written!! Love it.