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Wonderland Poetry Prompt Challenge Day 25

By Ellie HoovsPublished 8 months ago Updated 8 months ago 1 min read

pinwheels twirling,

spinning from breath,

blown through purple popsicle

stained lips,

sparkling in golden streams of light,

dust fairies floating,

in a summer morning window,

as butterflies catch

in the net of my throat,

words and wants fluttering together.

I spin silk around them,

wrapping them tightly while you aren't looking,

the wings too soft, too new,

to allow them to break.

The roses give me away,

reflecting their pink

on the ashen shyness of

my cheeks,

dabbled with freckles of copper

that fell from seraphim wings.

The stars witness me tossing stones,

desires dropped where sea glass cuts

and moonlight drowns;

They knot themselves to shipwrecks

no one has found.

I toss heart-wrought wishes,

the ghosts of dandelion seeds,

into the storm-ridden sky,

praying they will take root

somewhere.

someday.

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Ellie Hoovs

Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶8 months ago

    At last, my attempt: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/whimsical-wander%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E So delicately poignant: “The roses give me away, reflecting their pink on the ashen shyness of my cheeks, dabbled with freckles of copper that fell from seraphim wings.”💖

  • D.K. Shepard8 months ago

    Such beautiful imagery and enchanting lines! Perfect for whimsy!

  • angela hepworth8 months ago

    This was so very lovely!! We all need more whimsy and magic in our lives!

  • Calvin London8 months ago

    What a lovely light and floating poem, Ellie. Nice work. Here is my Day 25 poem: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/whimsical-wishes%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E 😊😊

  • Lovely poem , I will try and do another

  • Jasmine Aguilar8 months ago

    Love this! Just feels so peaceful and free!

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