Whimsical
Wonderland Poetry Prompt Challenge Day 25

pinwheels twirling,
spinning from breath,
blown through purple popsicle
stained lips,
sparkling in golden streams of light,
dust fairies floating,
in a summer morning window,
as butterflies catch
in the net of my throat,
words and wants fluttering together.
I spin silk around them,
wrapping them tightly while you aren't looking,
the wings too soft, too new,
to allow them to break.
The roses give me away,
reflecting their pink
on the ashen shyness of
my cheeks,
dabbled with freckles of copper
that fell from seraphim wings.
The stars witness me tossing stones,
desires dropped where sea glass cuts
and moonlight drowns;
They knot themselves to shipwrecks
no one has found.
I toss heart-wrought wishes,
the ghosts of dandelion seeds,
into the storm-ridden sky,
praying they will take root
somewhere.
someday.
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About the Creator
Ellie Hoovs
Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.
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Comments (10)
At last, my attempt: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/whimsical-wander%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E So delicately poignant: “The roses give me away, reflecting their pink on the ashen shyness of my cheeks, dabbled with freckles of copper that fell from seraphim wings.”💖
Here’s my entry for Whimsical: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/whimsical-qrt6e0ze5%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Such beautiful imagery and enchanting lines! Perfect for whimsy!
Nearly caught up now, here is Day 25! https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/the-toadstool-said-it-was-okay%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
This was so beautiful, like a gentle breeze on a warm day. https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/whimsy-8j1s0w0adj%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
This was so very lovely!! We all need more whimsy and magic in our lives!
Here's mine for today: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/whimsical-uj23gi0xvq%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E I loved this. So many images that appeal to me with the sea and its glass and the dandelion clocks and that whole randomness of loveliness going on.
What a lovely light and floating poem, Ellie. Nice work. Here is my Day 25 poem: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/whimsical-wishes%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E 😊😊
Lovely poem , I will try and do another
Love this! Just feels so peaceful and free!