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When I Dance With Passion, We Move and Pulse as One

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By Rowan Finley Published about a year ago 1 min read

When I dance with Passion,

we move and pulse as one.

I lift her,

and she gets me.

Gracefully flipping,

on love we are sipping.

I don’t need to try and fix you,

because I’m seeing your brokenness as your strength.

In the past,

I would have tried to fix you with my love,

but my love can only speed so fast,

and do so much all at once.

My love is imperfect…

but there is Another, whose love fixes all in us, all at once, in His timing, for His Glory.

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About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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  • L.I.Eabout a year ago

    Wow deep and beautiful. 🥰🥰🥰🥰 And very true and real. Its our job to love and not to fix.

  • Colleen Waltersabout a year ago

    This is great, in that He is the Counselor and the original author of fixing while the enemy is the author of brokenness. Fixing is orchestrated by the Spirit, and true fixing is by Him. The world 's breaking can't over- rule the Spirit's healing. This is a nice reminder that healing and fixing begin and end through Him ...😇😊❤️😁

  • Komalabout a year ago

    It's lovely to see the realization that while love may have imperfections, there's a higher power whose timing and love can heal everything. Truly moving! ✨

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    these were my favorite lines: I don’t need to try and fix you, because I’m seeing your brokenness as your

  • 𝓗𝓲𝓷𝓪𝓽𝓪about a year ago

    Beautifully expressed—letting love flow without trying to 'fix' speaks volumes about trust and acceptance.

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