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When Hearts Drown the Soul

It builds up, to much for the tender heart to hold

By Marie381Uk Published 8 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

When Hearts Drown the Soul

It starts so small, a crack, a slip

a name half-whispered on the lip

a glance that falters, steps that slow

and all you thought you’d never know

You hold the weight behind your eyes

pretend you’re fine with practiced lies

but silence builds, and shadows grow

where once the love would overflow

No flood arrives, just steady rain

that dulls the spark and sharpens pain

a ghost of touch, a colder bed

the things you wished you’d never said

And hearts, when heavy, sink like stone

they pull you down, they leave you prone

no storm to fight, no waves that roll,

just stillness where they drown the soul

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Nikita Angel8 months ago

    A sad, touching poem about love fading quietly

  • Muhammad 8 months ago

    Brilliant

  • Sandy Gillman8 months ago

    Aww this is so sad, but beautifully written.

  • Syira Husairi 8 months ago

    awww i am so touched with your poem :( good job !

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