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When Everything Says, Enough

Just Be

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished about a year ago 1 min read

Stubborn resistance

Or just luck, holding on

Piece de resistance

When everything’s gone

A fragile existence

Hanging out on a limb

Determined persistence

Branching beyond a whim

Barely surviving

One with the elements

Wild roots that keep climbing

Clinging to sentiments

It’s beauty a wonder

It’s strength, becoming testament

Succeeding while under

The pressures of pain’s unrest

Still, what’s lovely remains

Hanging there, in the balance

Keeping the unsung, sane

Exceeding life’s challenge

Giving one final reason

For me to withstand

The change of the season

Embracing who I am

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    Oooo, this was sooo deep! Loved your poem!

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    This is a way to look at life. Good job.

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    I really like how you infused self-love in this poem in the face of adversity and loss. Your line: Still, what’s lovely remains Hanging there, in the balance… works perfectly with the poem’s theme and the picture you selected. Really beautiful and thought-provoking poetry, Kelli. The pic reminds me of the O’Henry story The Last Leaf. It’s beautiful.

  • Mother Combsabout a year ago

    Love!! Succeeding while under!

  • C.Z.about a year ago

    “Clinging to sentiments” 🙏🏻🙌🏻 great line, love this resilient poem.

  • C. Rommial Butlerabout a year ago

    Well-wrought! Was the poem inspired by the picture or did you select the picture after writing the poem? They compliment each other perfectly!

  • Andrew C McDonaldabout a year ago

    Lovely Kelli. Sometimes just hanging in there is all it takes.

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