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What I Heard

For "The Sound of First Frost" Challenge

By Kendall Defoe Published 2 months ago 1 min read
From Gold to Grey

Leafblower broken?

You are high on the perfume,

I think...in the gold.

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Dark earlier now?

Rise and no shine in the day;

Silent without sun.

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The temperature?

You know what to expect next...

Where are those parkas?

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Rain hitting harder?

Leaves underfoot remind you:

You should use a rake.

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Wind-chill factor now?

You forgot about that, right?

The air sits harder.

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Weather forecast: snow?

You refuse to hear the truth.

Laughter in the dark?

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The first flakes are here?

Nothing serious; salt and

shovel scrape no path.

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Winter wonderland?

Surprised as a child again...

And where's that damn plow?

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Note: this is all about what it means to me to be a Canadian dealing with the change of seasons. I have no romantic notions about what the turn from autumn to winter means, and I am rather bored with the poetry that I have read that discusses the seasons without the reality of life as it is lived today.

Hence...this series of poems...

KD

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  • Paul Stewart2 months ago

    Love this take on the challenge. A lot of frosty poetry is rather bland and uninspiring I'll agree. This wasn't. Funny. Honest and human. Genuinely such a great entry, sir

  • Lana V Lynx2 months ago

    Very down to earth and humorous, Kendall!

  • C. Rommial Butler2 months ago

    Well-wrought! Life is work, but we must make time for joy. I suspect that this was the inspiration behind the first snowball... though I doubt the one on the receiving end much enjoyed it...

  • Sandy Gillman2 months ago

    This made me laugh out loud, finally, a winter poem that tells the truth!

  • Hahahahahaha nothing screams reality as much as your poem. Loved it!

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