you whacko little demon, you whacko little runt, you screamin' ragin'
creature, with your narco little stunts
you malicious, petty demon, you'll never ever leave
always makin' mischief with somethin' up your sleeve
i'll never ever let you steal my lively carefree days
i'll never ever let you in with your sadistic witchy ways
you nasty little whacko, you weirdo psycho-pop
if i weren't so gracious i'd give your arse a bunt
you whacko little demon, you whacko little runt, you screamin' ragin'
creature with your narco little stunts
About the Creator
ROCK aka Andrea Polla (Simmons)
~ American feminist living in Sweden ~ SHE/HER
Admin. Vocal Social Society
Find me: @andreapolla63.bsky.social
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Comments (14)
You made this up while making broccoli soup? 🤔 Lizards are next or frogs. #freedomforcreatures Very clever and ENTHUSIASTIC!!
"Narco Little Stunts," would be an excellent album title.
I read it as alluding to a human creature. A poignant piece!
An ornery little pet or fun-to-watch wild critter? I can relate either way, lol. Delightful!
This one is fun to read out loud btw 😁
Is it wrong of me to find this one like a ray of sunshine? Love it!
Hahahahahahha this made me chuckle! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
I agree with Babs, the rhythm and angry energy of your word selection carry this poem. Great writing!
Perfect meter & rhyme!!! It's whacko time!!!💕❤️❤️
But he look so cute. I guess you give the whacko a menace portrayal in the poem. I am going to take your side 🤗
I'm going to choose to believe this is about a very annoying non human creature!
Nice work, love the flow! 👍😊
Cool 😁
Ooo, I could think of a few that fit this bill. Loved the rhythm to this and the lingo, made it fun but still quite pointed :)