We're Giving So Much More
But What You Ask For Does Not Matter
This is just a free-form poem about people not listening and ploughing on regardless of advice.
The music is "Can't You See" by The Marshall Tucket Band
GRUEL
We got so much more for you, you are going to be amazed by our new stuff
Really?
Yes Really
Look at our new stuff, isn't it great?
It's just more gruel, we asked for more variety. We pay you for this
But you have lots more gruel, what more could you want?
Chocolate, steak, macaroni cheese, pasta, curry and that is just for starts
All that is on the roadmap, but we have given you more gruel, aren't you happy
I just told you, No!!
Why Not?
Start again on Line Five and Repeat Ad Infinitum
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Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred
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Comments (7)
This makes me think of Oliver when he asks for, "More please, may I have some more..." Hahaha!
Oof, relatable content right here!
The sad tale of virtually every food service offered at school, lol. They so often start off so well, then fade before they even reach the stretch.
Hahahahahhahaha the roadmap!! I see what you did there 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Love your humorously written poem!!!💕❤️❤️
It sounds yummy for the tummy 😊
Looks yummy