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War Shot Down R.I.P.

Godless you

By Marie381Uk Published 11 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

War Shot Down R.I.P.

It fell without a warning from the sky.

A silent shard through sullen clouds,

a metal bird unfeathered,

its wings torn by the bite of fire.

The sky did not shudder,

nor did the earth weep,

only the cold grip of smoke

clutched the air where it once soared.

No hero’s march, no solemn tune,

just the whisper of falling steel

and the quiet scatter of dust

as it met the ground

like a name forgotten in the wind.

Rest in peace,

gone but never forgotten,

a shadow in the sky

that still lingers.

Now a soldier in heaven above

Wrapped in Jesuses tender love.

All wars must end in 2025.

Jesus replace heatred with love ❤️

Amen 🙏

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham11 months ago

    From your lips to God's ears for this to truly happen. Good job.

  • Rohitha Lanka11 months ago

    A beautifully poignat and powerful poem. It captures the tragic essence of war with haunting imagery and a deep sense of loss. and very interesting poem and I wish you to hit in this week in top of the table. well written

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