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Walking in Tandem

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By Gerard DiLeoPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Walking in Tandem
Photo by Yomex Owo on Unsplash

I walk the walk with death

Who sees me but not, me, him

Who counts my every breath

And bides my meted int'rim

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I talk the talk with life

Who listens but argues back

And isn't as so forgiving

As death's amnesiac

.

I park my mark on history

Written in permanent ink

And those who follow the mystery

Will know the day I blinked

.

I died my death in an instant

And never saw it coming

And I moved the living, distant

Last breaths, thought I, outrunning

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Life's a series of lessons

The last one is taught anginal

We learn them in progression

Till time to cram for finals

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Gerard DiLeo

Retired, not tired. Hippocampus, behave!

Make me rich! https://www.amazon.com/Gerard-DiLeo/e/B00JE6LL2W/

My substrack at https://substack.com/@drdileo

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  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    The feelings are crafted inside the mind. Well talented.

  • Oooo, this was so profound! Well done!

  • I feel breath of my ancestral tombs in between these lines so powerful.

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    Time to cram for finals is a great finishing touch! Procrastinate whenever possible! Loved the poem, Gerard!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Loved the perspective. Can easily identify.

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    I knew it was from that!! I’m with ya, stepping’.

  • Gerard DiLeo (Author)about a year ago

    Inspired by Rachel Deeming's "Life Takes a Sideswipe," at https://shopping-feedback.today/longevity/death-takes-a-sideswipe%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E.%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">

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