Fighting for a solace
That seems out of my reach...
I am struggling not for possessions
But to be free...
I'm Giving the Best
With all, that I've Got...
Going aimlessly
Throughout my implements
I don't have a lot...
When my mind
Can't nap,
How do I sleep?
When I'm comfortless,
Who will comfort me?
When I'm short of breath,
Who will help me breathe?...
My eyes are filled with
Tears...How can I see?
Imagine I have a miracle
Where will it lead??
Out of everything in the world
I only wanted to be me...
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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My dream is to only write for a living. Having to work in warehouses to live, I can relate to this poem. Great job!
Lovely 💗
Oof, this hit me hard! This was so emotional and very deep!
Those first few lines really hit me. This was so honest and emotional. I think we can all feel this way sometimes. I know I do. I see you and all the good you try to share, so keep doing you :) Great work
This is beautiful! Keep being you, because you have a good heart and a talent to share.
Life is filled with so many questions and you find them well with your poetry. As always good job!
Beautiful
❤️ Love this❤️ Last line is beautiful
Thank you💕
Beautiful!
Super!!! Loved it💕💖😊
Beautiful piece. Well done.
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I think I have a new favorite!!!