Oh Jeff...
For Raymond G. Taylor's "Oh Jeff flash fiction challenge"
Oh, Jeff... I love you too...
but...
You ate my leftovers again....
That wasn’t just spaghetti—it was a symbol of trust!
How can I build a future with someone
who raids the fridge like a raccoon at midnight?
I’ve been patient, Jeff.
The pizza....
The cheesecake....
Even my secret stash of chocolate!
But this?
This was the last meatball.
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Thanks for reading!
This was written for Raymond G. Taylor's "Oh Jeff flash fiction challenge."
About the Creator
Komal
I write poems and stories that hit the feels.
When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.
𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 ℙ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕠 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟 𝕀𝕄ℙ𝔸ℂ𝕋
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Comments (28)
Please forgive the clumsy cut and paste. I would like to publish your entry (or entries) to the Oh-Jeff challenge in an upcoming book and of course need your permission to do so. Details are all here: https://shopping-feedback.today/writers/oh-jeff-the-book%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Thanks, Ray
Really funny ♦️♦️♦️♦️♦️
Hahaha! I love chocolates
Excellent job! A person’s private choccie stash is definitely off limits!😳🙃
Oh Jeff, couldn’t share that last meatball! That was too funny, Komal!
This is too funny and cute!
So funny, that final line is wonderful
Hey, All these lines made giggle ! Nicely done and fun!
This is hysterically funny! 😆
Oh no. Not the leftovers. that's it. it is over. Funny stuff.
Ha! Absolutely brilliant!
This has to be the most diabolical Jeff. How dare he touch the leftovers 😂
This made me LOL!
Supercute stuff! ❤️
Hahahahha, that is so funny! Very good!
She knew Jeff had a soft spot for food. She certainly has high expectations of Jeff. She just wants Jeff to fail.
Hahahahaha😂😂😂 Hey! Don't mess a girl and her food!! Loved the way you tied this all together! Love, love it! 💌😂
😂😂😂 she’s been through a lot, I can’t believe she forgave him after the pizza and the cheesecake, she’s got a good heart. But that last line through, totally unexpected and genius 👌🏽👏🏽🤗♥️
Well done I kinda want spaghetti now lol
Excellent ,and funny dialogue
Maybe it's time for a heart-to-heart about food boundaries and respect for each other's midnight cravings.
Ha ha, love it. A midnight fridge raider gets his comeuppance. Original and funny, well done.
The little things show how much he has you in mind! Besutiful.
Oh! Lol...That was the best sass ever 😃👀 I mean the last meatball? That is the perfect reason to call it. She forgave him many times; the stash of chocolate. lol I loved it! Did you read Jesse's new story? It's about us... I can't believe it!
That was such a funny one Komal!😊 I totally did not expect that, but it's true though when it comes to food, there's no fussing around😅 Well done girl, and good luck with the challenge!✨💕