Under The Golden Tree of Stars (A Rabbit Watches)
A Sijo Poem
Introduction
This is my first attempt at a Slijo Poem which was shown to me by Natalie Wilkinson in this story:
The first line is usually written in a 3-4-4-4 grouping pattern and states the theme of the poem, where a situation is generally introduced.
The second line is usually written in a 3-4-4-4 pattern (similar to the first) and is an elaboration of the first line's theme or situation (development).
The third line is divided into two sections. The first section, the counter-theme, is grouped as 3-5, while the second part, considered the conclusion of the poem, is written as 4-3. The counter-theme is called the 'twist,' which is usually a surprise in meaning, sound, or other device.
This poem is inspired by the beautiful painting by Angie Livingstone showing a rabbit under a Golden Tree of Stars.
The music is "Under Stars" by Brian Eno from the album "Apollo"
Under The Golden Tree of Stars (A Rabbit Watches)
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Sat Under The Golden Tree Of Of Shining Stars Is A Rabbit
The Rabbit, It Is Entranced By The Beauty Of What It Sees
All Good Things Give Us Memories
Now Is The Time To Go Home
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Comments (10)
I love this
Interesting new format (never heard of it until now) and lovely poem, Mike
Oooo, I've never heard of this format before. You executed it brilliantly!
Beautiful job on this one.
Loved this. Gave me the imagery of a rabbit hopping over the word memories.
Another interesting form and a well-crafted poem.
« All good things give us memories » - I really like this line. Glad you had a chance to try out the form!
I have never tried this form of poetry; you displayed it perfectly tender.
Great work and it tells a story of the rabbit in the picture.
Beautifulβ¨