Twiggy
peanut butter segue

it rhymed with truck
and it didn’t
but i was in a punt
(like teflon here)
a square nosed boat
made out of wood
flat bottom affair
no seats
no engine
just a stick
i argued with myself
and found
i was agitated
to a degree
to an extent
to a party
inside a small tent
the no smoking rule
was gleefully enforced
by sadistic zealots
no clubs
just a stick
the red car wouldn't idle
the stereo didn't work
half of the no signal
notification was blurred
pre-tuned to nothing
and that was what i heard
no static
no click
no hiss
just a stick It was at this point in time my mind wandered to the peanut butter sandwiches in my lunch box, not eaten at work today. I think I might be over peanut butter for a bit? This is sad as I enjoy peanut butter. The bread still soft to touch, sealed in an orange Tupperware lunch box that used to belong to one of my kids back in the day. It might be ok tomorrow, I’ll take it just in case:
- i might get hungry
- i might need something else to eat or,
- peanut butter sandwiches become a new currency overnight and i’m in at ground zero
- it’s just a stick
i found a small piece of tree
a very small piece of tree
not where it ought to be
on the ground in front of me
i had to just sit still and see
so i sat and i was be still
Twiggy was just Twiggy
not getting funky
not getting jiggy
this pot of tea
was getting cold
these parts of me
were getting old
i went to the cliffs
and inhaled an echo
waves of the near
and the far
rang through me
like a bell
i just wanted to see
see something see anything
see it maybe tease me with a trick
but it wasn't even a special branch
it was
just a stick
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
Reader insights
Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
Top insight
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions



Comments (14)
Nice.
Peanut butter sandwich 🥪 hmmm. You made me rethink my whole life here, you crazy loon 😂 great work
Mmmm, now I wanna eat peanut butter sandwiches hehehehe. Loved your poem! Congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Pnb sammiches becoming currency is a legit thing that could happen 😁
Congratulations, I wish I had that train of thought running through my brain. Awesome
This was bonkers.But great.
Congrats on this top story
Congrats on TS! This deserves attention :)
Back to say congrats on the TS.
This is quite good, changing direction and flow, and sometimes chaotic, like a stream can be. Well done.
Great!!😊💕
As always, a fun ride!
This is the type of form and flow that I expect the stream of consciousness poems to look like and you nailed it. Loved this! And cracked up at the pb sandwich becoming currency.
The absence of sound— “no static / no click / no hiss”—creates a poignant silence that underscores the poem's themes. Love this, Brenton! 💌