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TRIPARTITE SO(U)L MACHINE

Bones of the Earth

By C. Rommial ButlerPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Orphic Egg by Jacob Bryant (1774)

TRIPARTITE SO(U)L MACHINE

On gossamer strings you pulled me,

Entangled in the visceral mind.

You really believed you fooled me

But you’re the one left in a bind.

My One Strength denies your power plays,

Like garbage collects in a sieve.

Which is to say, if you don’t change your ways,

I don’t care if we ever leave.

Infernally doomed,

Eternally saved.

TRIPARTITE SO(U)L MACHINE

Vision consumed

And on stone engraved.

TRIPARTITE SO(U)L MACHINE

Fading with time,

The canvas rubbed blank.

TRIPARTITE SO(U)L MACHINE

Now for this rhyme

You have me to thank!

TRIPARTITE SO(U)L MACHINE

***** * *****

Bones of the Earth

I am...

the bones of the earth.

I creak and click

and snap and snick.

I whisper the words

that make sinew stick

to stones, for what it’s worth.

I find no reason

to disrupt the season,

this moment of decay,

for on cloud nine or in the pit

we only ever accrue it...

to give it away.

I am...

surreal poetry

About the Creator

C. Rommial Butler

C. Rommial Butler is a writer, musician and philosopher from Indianapolis, IN. His works can be found online through multiple streaming services and booksellers.

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  • Antoni De'Leonabout a year ago

    You wax so poetic, for a moment I got lost in a different time. So well done.

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Awesome lines!!! Loved your surreal poem!!!1❤️❤️💕

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Extremely well written, haunting and punchy at the same time 😁👍

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Such a well crafted rhythm throughout! Very well done!

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    Creak and crick and snap and snick. Love that for the bones of the earth.

  • We only ever accrue it to give it away, I especially loved that line! Excellent work!

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    What a mystifying and yet quite magical tale you've woven within your poem. Wonderfully well done.

  • Belleabout a year ago

    Incredible! I feel like there are many ways to interpret this, and would love to hear more of your thoughts ☺️

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    You write with both sophistication and depth, and clearly have a strong talent for rhythm and meter. But reading this poem makes me wish I had spent more time studying philosophy and world myth so I could better appreciate your underlying themes. Which is not to say that I have not spent considerable time on both, but just to say not nearly enough. There seem many ways of interpreting this poem from the gossamer puppet strings to the implied stasis in the face of (undesired?) change. And then you have the competing themes of tripartite soul and the ultimate declaration of being … I am. But like any piece of complex art, unpacking it means making assumptions which is just a slightly more complex version of taking a stab in the dark. Since the pic of the Orphic Egg references mythological beginnings while the poem harkens back to Plato’s belief regarding the nature of the soul, I wish now I had majored in Philosophy rather simply minoring. Damn, college was a long time ago! It would be a lot easier and use less space to simply ask - what does it mean or is it intended as a mystery much as life already is? I swear, I stopped trying to unpack Emily Dickinson a long time ago.

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