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to see fall more than once

outside the same window

By Leigh Victoria Phan, MS, MFAPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Winner in Falling Leaves Challenge
(photo by author)

one red leaf piercing

the green ivy blessing my

concrete city home

GratitudeHaikunature poetry

About the Creator

Leigh Victoria Phan, MS, MFA

Writer, bookworm, sci-fi space cadet, and coffee+tea fanatic living in Brooklyn. I have an MS in Integrated Design & Media and an MFA in Fiction from NYU. I share poetry on Instagram as @SleeplessAuthoress.

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  • Marilyn Glover3 months ago

    Lovely visual, Leigh; congratulations on your win!🍂

  • L.C. Schäfer3 months ago

    It's a little shout isn't it ☺

  • Lamar Wiggins3 months ago

    Wow! Love your use of 'blessing'! Congrats, Leigh!

  • Sara Wilson3 months ago

    congrats

  • Sandy Gillman3 months ago

    I love this! Congratulations on your win!

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Alison McBain3 months ago

    Wonderful contrast in your haiku between nature and city - leaves and concrete. Congrats on the win!

  • Kristen Balyeat3 months ago

    So simple, yet beautifully rich in feeling! Congratulations! 🩷🙌🏽🎉

  • Sam Spinelli3 months ago

    Pretty amazing how one dissenting leaf can stand out so beautifully. Nice picture too! I like to see art and photography from authors, and wish there was more of this and less of the ai generated imagery on here.

  • K.B. Silver 3 months ago

    I love that this brings small blessings into sharp focus. Congrats on your win.

  • Teresa Renton3 months ago

    Lovely simplicity in this blessing. Congratulations on your win 🥳

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