I saw a woman yesterday,
while walking in the park.
She wore a smile I recognized,
but her eyes were cold and dark.
*
Her step, a little quick,
her eyes looking towards the ground.
She never paused to meet my eyes,
as She hurried through the crowd.
*
I watched her as she kept that pace,
disconnected from the rest.
And wondered what had happened,
to lock that door inside her chest.
*
Did she lose the key to happiness?
Had someone let her down?
I ached inside as I thought about,
what made her smile begin to frown.
*
Then I looked up to see a reflection,
in a window I passed by.
I felt a little panicked, as began to realize.
*
I, was the woman walking.
I didn’t recognize,
the person that I had become,
hiding there behind my eyes
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Comments (3)
Beautiful poetry! I loved the ending, well done :)
Wow! Amazing!
Awesome surreal poem. Hearted!!!