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The Winter Punk

~ a reimagining of Jack Frost ~

By Caroline JanePublished about a year ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - November 2024
The Winter Punk
Photo by Nicolas Picard on Unsplash

On sepia's lost-summer stage, squats a rebellious sage.

A great colourless punk.

Ruler of mulched-up funk,

hoary and sweaty with diamante evergreen firs bristled down the ridge of his back.

He arrived last night in our shivers.

Faster than light and brimming with smite, he rode in on a graffiti of stars, swirling to earth on mists to crash cars while spitting out crystals as kisses.

As he touched ground, he stretched out a love-hate hand and slapped the old gold land hard. All the while, he looked night deep in the eye, and with a tattoo of silent tears, he cried.

Without so much as dabbing a cheek, the moment he had landed, he strode on with his freak in a holy, mesmerising streak of tantric tessellation:

A petrified dance featuring captured angels in a trance, fluorescent in expanse and exaltation.

His is an elegant rage, born of an unwritten manifesto on an edgeless page. Rapturous and meaningless at once, it riddles all life and death with ruthless truth and airless breath and condemns beauty as a lie.

After his excretion was complete, he lay down for a sleep, exhaling peace in whispering murmuration:

A hushed song of souls, ghosts and old woes spiralling up into heavenly fascination.

Now, the sun threatens to rise into dawn's indigo-layered skies, and he lies awake among a skulk of silvery shadow. A lurking recluse. At odds and obtuse in the honied promise of tomorrow.

As day steals the way and blue beats brackish grey, it seems he still has one more punch in his hand. With white knuckles gripped and teeth brash with spit, he stares up at the dawn of the light.

Without a tremble in sight,

no fear...

just fight,

he steps proudly out from the dark.

Stark before larks. Hard and pock-marked, he stands fully frontal on old sepia's stage. He sticks out his chin, flashes a fuck-you-all grin, and, unto sun's first hello, he glitters.

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About the Creator

Caroline Jane

CJ lost the plot a long time ago. Now, she writes to explore where all paths lead, collecting crumbs of perspective as her pen travels. One day, she may have enough for a cake, which will, no doubt, be fruity.

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  • L.C. SchΓ€ferabout a year ago

    I liked "teeth brash with spit" 😁

  • L.I.Eabout a year ago

    Excellent poem, congratulations on the well-deserved top story β„οΈπŸ€

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Great job and perfect ending with fu grin!! Congrats on TS. πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³

  • Gregory Paytonabout a year ago

    I really enjoyed this. Well done!

  • The Invisible Writerabout a year ago

    wow this was off the charts good

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! πŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠ

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    What an outstanding narrative poem! Congrats on Top story, Caroline!

  • Marie381Uk about a year ago

    Well done on this one

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Took them long enough! congrats on Top Story!

  • Testabout a year ago

    This is great and funny! I like it so much!

  • The Dani Writerabout a year ago

    Oh my stars, that was powerful! Truly unique! My favourite part..."His is an elegant rage, born of an unwritten manifesto on an edgeless page. Rapturous and meaningless at once, it riddles all life and death with ruthless truth and airless breath and condemns beauty as a lie." A winner of a poem!

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    Well, there goes first place! Holy cow, this is good, Caroline!

  • Hehehehehehe I loved this so much, especially the grin!

  • Testabout a year ago

    Caroline, I love the impish voice you chose for the narrative voice! It made smile. You imagery in this prose was fun and so vivid! Very well done!

  • Call Me Lesabout a year ago

    What an ending lol love the grin! βœ¨οΈπŸ™ŒπŸ˜‚ Was not expecting it.

  • JBazabout a year ago

    A masterpiece of writing, haunting and beautiful leaving us wanting more.

  • Wonderfully eerie and brilliant! Jack is a bit of a menace it would seem! Love it! πŸ’œc

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Superbly penned and creatively reimaged jack frost, loved it!!!β€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’•

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    What is there to shred? You consistently blow me away with your words ❀️

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    This was something else! Always adore your writing. So stirring, imaginative...evocative and full of depth! Bloody Brilliant, CAroline!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    That was vicious. It read like a terrifying old fairy tale. Excellent work, my friend.

  • Some fun rhymes in your winter re-imagining , excellent work

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