sea's mirror ripples
lost, sky seeks itself on land
jagged rocks soften
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Caroline Jane
CJ lost the plot a long time ago. Now, she writes to explore where all paths lead, collecting crumbs of perspective as her pen travels. One day, she may have enough for a cake, which will, no doubt, be fruity.
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horizons
horizons divide where heaven and earth collide as one reflection
By Caroline Janeabout a year ago in Poets
Day 4 of Quitting
If this is how sobriety feels, maybe it’s better to go through life a little buzzed… this, along with other hits like, I want to kill myself, I wish I was dead, and I’m going to throw myself off a bridge have been the only thoughts on rotation these past few days. I promise myself that if, in a month, I still feel like this (‘this’ meaning despondent, full of rage, and simultaneously numb) I can go back to smoking. Until mid-February though? Nicotine is off the table.
By sleepy drafts6 days ago in Longevity
Comments (15)
amazing and beautiful
sea's mirror ripples. What a beautiful poem and haiku. Well done.
Beautiful poem.
Beautiful!
Such a clever piece! Love this!
This is another beautiful take on that breathtaking image. Question, Ms Jane! lol. That sounds like you're a teacher. But quick question - is that someone related to you in the image or just a stranger who happened to be in the shot?
Oooo, sea's mirror, that was so clever! Loved your Haiku!
Gorgeous poem, Caroline!! Just like the photo!! Love it!!
lost sky....wonderful
Beautiful 😍
Another superb entry! Well done, Caroline!
This is such a beautiful description of the scenery. Excellent writing ♥︎
Sky looking at ripples, thinking "Holy fuck, I'm drunk." I know, I know. What is wrong with me?
Ooo this is the best of the 3 for sure and they were all very good! Something about it has so much extra emotion.
So Lefty, Cj - You just store them up and then bless us with a lot of them...but, as you do to me, it's so fun to tease you. j-bud.in.l.a.