The Vernal Jar
On ephemeral pools

The vixen noses her way to the mouth of her den, and gives a wary sniff
Her mate leads the way, their paws puncture the snow
Four-clawed prints of warmth
Where the crystal-fluff melts softly to dampen dormant blades of grass
A pattering-path,
Her gait is shorter, wider, less playful than his
Though her prints are just as deep, for the weight she bears upon her feet
She finds a melting puddle
Where the snow thaws it pools,
Cold as crystal and just as pure
The water is still as glass
And it shimmers beneath the reach of the westering sun
She laps at the frigid puddle, her tongue scrapes invisible floes of ice
She drinks from the Fountain of Rebirth
From the puddle that has not yet bloomed
Then she retreats to the warmth of her den
And her mate stands guard
While she births their pups unto the world
As the days get longer, Winter slinks away
A front rises from the South, to roll in like a wave
And the snows begin to gush
Part time tributaries run like arteries and the lowlands flood
The pups fight for a spot to watch
As the waters rise
And the danger creeps closer
And closer
To the mouth of their den
The brave one reaches out one wavering paw and slaps the water
He flinches at the newness
But the fox and the vixen, they chose by good instinct,
The waters do not intrude beyond the brink
And when they recede
The foxes pick their way out across the field
To find a drink
The smells are chaos now,
For the floods have seeded the Winter pool,
With a million violent currents that laid a billion eggs and spores among the silt
Of cyclops
Of daphnia
Of copepods
Of hydra
And amoebae
Of bacteria and algae
The foxes splash the glittering sun-drenched waters
The damp is stagnant to the nose, so they meander on to search out waters running pure
They leave the teeming vernal pond
But at dusk, the singing frogs move in for a place to breed and spawn
And like magic, the pond is ringed with jelly by a not so distant dawn
The birds bring duckweed and fish eggs
Then the dragon flies come to lay
And the nymphs begin to prey
On tadpoles and larval fry tinier bugs
The little magic puddle froths with life,
A microcosmic sea with creatures unknown to land
The kraken and leviathan wage their wars between wet grains of sand
And when the ephemeral ocean dries and the mud begins to crack
The rains will fall upon the dust
And the petrichor shall call the sniffing vixen back
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Authors note:
I work for a county park.
A few shifts back I found hundreds of baby fish in a puddle on our service road. I assume the eggs got washed there after a flood. I transferred as many as I could to the creek.
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Sam Spinelli
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Comments (6)
The imagery is stunning, the description...it felt like you not only told the story but created the creatures and nature surrounding them ...it felt so real..it obviously is...you are what you've done? This was brilliant!
Such a beautiful poem - love the imagery: The kraken and leviathan wage their wars between wet grains of sand And when the ephemeral ocean dries and the mud begins to crack
Well I’m going to disagree - I thought this was beautiful. Firstly I love foxes, but the images and language in this were gorgeous. And well done on rescuing the fish. You’re a good bloke.
Beautifully expressed and written :)
I'm shocked that you're not pleased with this. I feel it's excellent! I especially loved the puddle that hasn't bloomed yet. That was both beautiful and clever. I'm so happy you decided help those baby fish 🥹❤️
Definitely not pleased with the final product here, but I can’t figure out exactly why. Anyway I’m tired of trying to tweak it. I think the rhythm feels off, and I guess I’m having trouble conveying the sense of mystery and awe that I feel when I look at the microscopic world of puddles. Anyway, as always, wide open to criticism. How could I have fixed or improved this poem?