The Veil
For Harold B Wade (1930-2019)

Coming midnight, when bells toll eerie,
my heartbeats faint and pulses weary,
Breath a specter, grim and leery, threatening to flee my frame.
Appears a wall, a pallid gleaming, translucent white, in shadows streaming,
Voices through the veil come dreaming, murmuring my mortal name.
“Stay thy call,” I gasped in terror, voice to silence lost its claim,
For my sons, my life, still cling my trembling hand to worldly aim.
*
Heartbeats falter, slow and solemn, in this chamber dark and lonesome,
Wall aglow with ghostly omen, woven by the veil’s soft flame.
Through its sheen, ancestral faces—Momma, Papa, lost in traces—
Granddaddy’s shade, with ancient graces, bids me join their timeless game.
“Not yet,” I cry, though silence smothers, none to hear my anguished plea,
Friends and widows, left to languish—who shall aid their misery?
*
Heartbeats wane, a dirge’s measure, breath a thief that steals my treasure,
Veil upon the wall’s pale pressure lures me to its mystic claim.
There, my love, through sixty-three years, her voice, a bell through misty tears,
Beckons soft where starlight steers, calling me to leave this flame.
“Not yet,” I moan, with fervent yearning, craving one last flight to soar,
Mach one’s thunder, skies a-burning, ere I pass that spectral door.
*
Heartbeats quiver, scarce enduring, veil’s allure forever luring,
Her hand extends, my soul assuring, through the shroud of endless night.
Sons clasp tight my hand, despairing, grief in eyes, their hearts a-tearing,
“Come,” she whispers, gently bearing, “with new wings, thou shalt take flight.”
Moribund, I scan their earthly sorrow, tears that fall in mournful stream,
Fingers slip, my strength I borrow, yielding to the veil’s grim dream.
*
Heartbeats still, no breath to linger, death’s cold touch, a raven’s finger,
Veil upon the wall, a harbinger, opens wide its ghostly gate.
“I’m coming,” I sigh, to her replying, through the mist, my spirit flying,
Soul unbound, no longer vying, freed from flesh’s heavy weight.
With her, to heaven’s stars I wander, past the earth’s confining dome,
Bells ring out, my soul grows fonder—through the veil, I’m called to home.
***
About the Creator
J. S. Wade
Since reading Tolkien in Middle school, I have been fascinated with creating, reading, and hearing art through story’s and music. I am a perpetual student of writing and life.
J. S. Wade owns all work contained here.
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Comments (20)
Circling back to say congrats o honourable mention on this week's leaderboard JS!!
Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
first of all, congratulations on TS; now, your poem: BREATHTAKING!!! I'll never look at death the same way again. This was truly beautiful.
Lovely, thankyou for sharing and congratulations on Top Story xx
Very deep and emotional. I loved the rhyme structure with long lines. It lent itself well to the narrative. Congrats on Top Story!
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Just.... wow, JS!! Left me staring into space as I came to grips with this/ myself! Well done and congrats on Top Story!! 🎉
Good gawd, what a fantastic piece. Reminded me a lot of Poe’s Raven. I was captivated, it had an almost musical quality to it
I was especially moved by the progression of those faltering heartbeats across the stanzas, mirroring the speaker's reluctant surrender, and the heartfelt nods to family and lost loved ones that ground the ethereal in raw human emotion.
Well-versed. ❤️
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Your cadence felt like sailing on the sea. I especially loved the contrast between the ethereal beyond and this line: “freed from flesh’s heavy weight” Beautifully written!
Absolutely beautiful. It feels like a mix of "The Raven" and "Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night". The repetition creates a wonderful rhythm, and I love the structure and rhyme used. Very well done.
This was so poignant and beautifully penned. Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️
I love your story. The veil is thin between life & death/
The imagery of the veil and the tug-of-war between wanting to stay for your loved ones and being called to peace was so vivid.
What lovely imagery. Great piece
Beautiful, Scott. It’s good to see you. It’s been a while.
Brilliantly penned!!! Brought tears.❤️❤️💕
As gorgeous are the rhymes and rhythms, as painful is this month for you as welcome are their calls please stay.