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The Trap of Time

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By Paul StewartPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
The Trap of Time
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Time is a trap

It keeps us

in patterned lifestyles

and lifecycles

Keeps our memories

safe but unreachable

We can't go back

Only forwards

Staying in the trap

The trap that is time

Meet deadlines

Get paid

medical treatment

Meet friends and family

fall in love

live and die

all within the trap

The trap of time

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Author's Notes: More thoughtful poetry that's been rattling around my head based on one line/idea that branched out.

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Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

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  • ThatWriterWoman2 years ago

    This had a very big emotional impact on me. This absolutely reached me when I needed it! Brilliant!

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Ain't that the truth!

  • RP2 years ago

    I agree!!

  • Live and die. So true. Yet so many people are dying, not living. So sad. Loved your poem!

  • Sara Wilson2 years ago

    So very true. Time really does hold you prisoner. You look back on times you thought were so hard and they turn out to be some of the best times. I have been finding myself looking back more and more at baby pictures of my kiddos and missing it so so bad. What I wouldn't give for just one day back in that time. What a great piece. 👌

  • L.C. Schäfer2 years ago

    Another great accident! 😁👍

  • Kristen Balyeat2 years ago

    Great thoughts, Paul, and perfectly expressed! The concept of time is constantly swirling in my head. 💫✨⏳

  • Lamar Wiggins2 years ago

    The trap reminds this one it’s time to get out of bed and deal with the world. Thank for sharing.

  • This was on my mind yesterday / today! Another great poem Paul ❤️✨🕊️🌙

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