The Third Sister
A Rhyming Story
Deep below the turquoise surface
Surrounded by swaying kelp trees
Stands the sea king’s coral palace
The ruler of the seven seas
His daughters growing wise and strong
Save the youngest, whose broken heart
From mortal man and silenced song
Had forever torn them apart
The sad sisters wept salty tears
And did not rise above the waves
For their great sorrows and their fears
But the third sister, bold and brave
Could not confine herself to grief
So Triteia, the fierce and fair
Ventured beyond the coral reef
To feel the sun’s kiss on the air
Once she had watched children at play,
Heard sweet music, and seen dancing
Had soaked in the colors of day
The stars at night, so entrancing
But when she emerged all was still
No laughter or bark from a dog
Just grey wisps in climbing tendrils
A bitter smell within the smog
A lone ship crept with tattered sails
Slowly out toward the open sea
Triteia swished her scaly tail
And followed behind cautiously
Then a sound seemed to split the sky
A great leviathan with wings!
With gaping mouth she watched it fly
To the ship and saw it circling
Then from its maw white light fell fast
The masts and sails began to burn
As the beast spit another blast
Sailors jumped from the smoking stern
Triteia swam with swift straight strokes
A boy was tangled up, sinking
On water she breathed he would choke
She took hold, pulled, without thinking
Then dragged him to the sandy shore
And waited in the shallow tide
When he awoke he gasped and swore
Triteia did not try to hide
“What monster destroyed this island?”
He gulped and said, “Twas a dragon.
She burns cities, ships; small and grand,
Enraged since her egg was stolen.”
“Who stole her egg? Where is it now?”
He shrugged. “Oh, how I wish I knew!
I’d bring it to her nest somehow.
And make peace! If I had a clue!”
Triteia had a clever mind
A plan was weaving together
A plot as good as one could find
She asked, “What’s your name, young sailor?”
“John,” he said with bright sparkling eyes.
She smiled. “Meet me here at midnight.
With your help, I’ll search out this prize.
And we’ll set this wrong back to right.”
She flicked her tail to say farewell
Then dove beneath foaming water
To return to the king’s castle
And a hidden trove of treasure
Sword of aquamarine and pearl
Hilt in hand, she traveled the way
To a dark pool that swirls and whirls
Where the sea witch ensnares her prey
“So you want legs like your sister!”
The witch cackled. “You foolish, dear!”
“That’s not quite the thing I’m after.
With all your spies, what do you hear?
Who has the dragon’s egg? And where?”
“You know everything has a price.”
“Right. How about this? It’s quite nice!”
She raised the sword and the witch squealed.
“A Nereid blade! Touch of death!”
“Yes! One prick and you can’t be healed.
You’ll pay the cost to keep your breath.”
“On his ship, Bastian has the egg.”
“Now resurrect me a small ship.
Then the draught that will give me legs,
And a second one to take grip
And change them back into a tail.”
The sea witch chanted her strange spells.
A ship from its grave rose to sail
She stirred potions of awful smells.
Triteia took vials in hand
Left the sea witch far behind her
One more thing then upward to land:
Some armor from a drowned sailor
She found fearless John on the beach
And taking her draught, screamed in pain
But the prize was within her reach
With feet beneath her and some strain
She boarded her ship, took the helm
With John as her trusted first mate
For days they sailed in quiet calm
Then cannon fire and roaring great
A dragon and a pirate ship
Both stuck in a losing battle
The ship sinking, its black sails ripped
Egg lost in the wreckage tangle
Crew doomed by their greedy captain
Mournful mother searching sadly
No sight of the dreaded Bastian
Triteia’s heart ached so badly
She dove in, sighted a red flash
Even with legs she swam with skill
Gripping the egg, a sudden clash
Captain Bastian fought for it still
She drew her shining sword and slashed
The pirate went limp, drifted down
She kicked and at last breathed and splashed
For a tailless mermaid can drown
John pulled her and the egg aboard
She raised the ruby orb up high
Above their heads the dragon soared
And watched them with a wary eye
A gentle swoop and lowered claw
Triteia released the smooth egg
No fire fell from the mother’s maw
They stood in wonder on sea legs
Watching the dragon fly away
Human and princess of water
Had saved immortal souls that day
By being both brave and clever
Triteia’s first great adventure
Was drawing swiftly to a close
What comes next for the third sister?
Wait and see where the story goes!
Author's Note: This was written for the 2024 NYC Midnight Rhyming Story Challenge. My assignment included the following: Genre - Fairy Tale, Emotion - Courageous, Theme - Fish out of water
About the Creator
D.K. Shepard
Character Crafter, Witty Banter Enthusiast, World Builder, Unpublished novelist...for now
Fantasy is where I thrive, but I like to experiment with genres for my short stories. Currently employed as a teacher in Louisville.
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Comments (15)
You are so talented, and you write more than one place. This was a delightful rhyming fairy tale. Nicely Done!!!
I do love a rhyming story, and you nailed this one! I may be biased, because it's right up my alley 😁
A delightful fairytale & excellently rhyme… quite a feat! Hope you won!
Not an easy task at all but you nailed the prompt in my opinion. Makes me want to give it a shot!
Absolutely brilliant Dk- So much emotion - Well done indeed.
This is a wonderful tale filled with darkness and light! Loved your rhyming story, DK!
A lovely story! Could make a great picture book
Well-wrought! All your writing is great, but you excel in the realm of fantasy!
This was just so lovely. I had to go back and check it was a poem because it felt like the most wonderful, magical story. Great stuff DK.
I loved the name Triteia! And wow, she was willing to go through the painful transformation just to get the egg back. She's awesomeeee!
Brilliant D.K. You created so much imagery and emotion. This was a super-great read.
Ah, I'm so glad I got to read this! I love stories told in poetry like this and you've done such an excellent job. Phenomenal read!
Wow, what a beautiful and elaborate tale, DK! If I were the judge I'd certainly have given you the first prize.
Daahlink-D - I’d like to ‘Nest’ in the back of your classroom to see how you can possibly write ✍️ all of these enchanting tales and still teach…🖍❤️ j.in.l.a.
A triumphant tale, told competely in verse! Well crafted, D.K!