The Sun Loves The Moon
Their Love Is Out Of This World
The sun took the day off from the bold rosy sky
to see the moon, show off his skin
As he hung with the men that fly by -
in the ship full of heat, made of tin
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She said she will wait at the edge of the dusk
as he bows down his head, just near dawn
She will beam as he dons on his musk
her love for his glow, goes on and on
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Kept arms span away, due to the turn of our orb
they fill the sky with a warm glow of tear
None of her hope can it curb
she will come back for him, year into year
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A tale of true love, that has been thru it all
will give hope to the few who will see
Even the tide can - not pull them away
what a folk tale, for you and for me
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Comments (5)
A true love poem for nature and human.
Whoaaaa, this was so magnificent! I absolutely loved it!
I love this concept, this is a beautiful poem.
Ah, for every new moon when they're nearest each other (at least from our vantage point), & every eclipse, whether lunar or solar, when they join in our sky as one.
Beautifully written!!! Love this!!!❤️❤️💕