The Path Of Stars
A Villanelle Inspired By The Angie Livingstone Painting
Introduction
This is my fifty-seventh piece inspired by Angie Livingstone's inspirational artwork.
A similar picture inspired this poem:
You can find her on Facebook at the link below.
This is her Etsy store
Here is information about The Rollright Stones:
The music is "Rollright Stones" by Traffic
The Path Of Stars
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Down From The Moon, Came The White Hare
Through Trees Toward The Rollright Stones
Trailing A Path Of Shining Stars
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To The Stones, The Place That Is Where
The Wind Blows Backwards, Hear It Moan
Down From The Moon, Came The White Hare
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In This Stone Circle They Are There
The Sacred Spirits, Dancing Flames
Trailing A Path Of Shining Stars
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Luna's Light Shines On Silver Stars
Through The Circle The Path Is Bound
Down From The Moon, Came The White Hare
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Outside The Stones Runs The White Hare
Beneath The Trees On Grassy Ground
Trailing A Path Of Shining Stars
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Every Night Yes, He Will Be Here
Magic Everlasting, Is Done
Down From The Moon, Came The White Hare
Trailing A Path Of Shining Stars
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Comments (7)
The white hare made me think of Alice in Wonderland. Loved your poem!
'Down from the moon, came the white hare' oh this line is so lovely when it is repeated. The image just sits with you and it's such a pleasant one. Makes me feel like I could also come down from the moon. The rhythm of this piece is so nicely done I felt you were very connected to the song and the image, and that could've added to it. You always are, but especially for this one. It could also be the fact that this is the first time that I am listening to the music you always include in your piece. Loved it a lot, a whole lot actually. Nicely done Mike π€β€οΈ
I love how magical this is βΊ Makes me think of Tiffany Aching and the hare leaping through the flames without getting burnt βΊ
Moonlit hare journeys between ancient stones under star-lit whispersβyour villanelle dances with magic, silence, and cosmic wonder. ππ
This could be like a mini-Stonehenge. Really like this image and as usual the words work with picture. Great job.
The wind blows backward makes me think of breathing in air flows backwards maybe astonished and the magic circleπ€π³πππ
Any time I get a new Wikipedia page to read itβs a good day