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The Odd Couple!

A Senryu

By Angie the Archivist 📚🪶Published 2 years ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
The Odd Couple!
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Silver and gold shoes…

No! I don’t have two left feet!

Guess my thongs make do!

???????????

Inspired by the below story… and of course the memory of when I arrived at church, went to whip on a pair of my classy silver or gold court shoes, only to discover my mistake made in haste! Instead, I cut a ‘classy’ figure in my rumpty dumpty, rubber, house thongs!😳😵‍💫🥹

For FunhumorSenryufact or fiction

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  • John Cox2 years ago

    This totally works as a Senryu. Great work!

  • Daphsam2 years ago

    Soooo funny!!!😄

  • This was too funny. Not gonna lie my mind went to the gutter for a second lol before the wiser voice that lives in my mind said no dummy thongs for your feet!

  • Hahahahahahhahahaha this was so freaking hilarious!

  • B.R. Shenoy2 years ago

    Great work! Thanks for the kind mention.

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    Are thongs not acceptable church wear?

  • Oh my my! Embarrassing or funny or both!

  • John Cox2 years ago

    Laugh out loud funny!

  • Shirley Belk2 years ago

    That is hilarious!!

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