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The Moment and Metre of Who We Are

A poem about the here and now

By emPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Runner-Up Place in Ode to Ordinary Challenge
The Moment and Metre of Who We Are
Photo by Chan Chai Kee on Unsplash

Forget time and space and the foreverness of all,

Move on from the speed in which an apple will fall,

Switch off the observatories chasing light from the past,

Stop trying, for a moment, to lure our future in, fast.

Because this is for the now, as quietly as it arrived,

Everything but this moment is so awkwardly contrived.

This is also for the here, miniscule and metres long,

Four walls that we know so well, the place where we belong.

The plainness of a Tuesday, not a futuristic tomorrow,

The homeliness of a kitchen, not the cosmic reach we dare to borrow.

The moment that we’re in right now, the room we occupy right here,

The mundanity of daily life - it’s kept us alive, right, my dear?

The when and where of who we are, it’s always the same.

Despite our ravenous curiosity, these are the rules to the game.

We can strive to live however long and venture however far.

But it’s always here and now, today. The moment and metre of who we are.

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About the Creator

em

I’m a writer, a storyteller, a lunatic. I imagine in a parallel universe I might be a caricaturist or a botanist or somewhere asleep on the moon — but here, I am a writer, turning moments into multiverses and making homes out of them.

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  • Esala Gunathilake2 years ago

    Wow it is incredible.

  • Gabriel Huizenga2 years ago

    Brilliant work!

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Authentic, pure & powerful!!!♥️♥️💕

  • Great rhythm of life piece. Congratulations on your win.

  • Lynn Fenske2 years ago

    Well done! Well conceived and well written. You've really captured and glorified the power of Now. I think Eckhart Tolle would be impressed.

  • Can there be anything more extraordinarily ordinary than the here & now?

  • This is so true and I gotta learn to do this! Powerful poem!

  • Suze Kay2 years ago

    Loved the phrase "The plainness of a Tuesday" Such a succinct and relatable thought. Great poem, em!

  • KJ Aartila2 years ago

    Appreciate the now. ❤️

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