the Knowlege of
...& we would do it again
the fruit
was sweet,
juicy,
delicious,
nutritious,
healthy.
~
why was it forbidden?
~
because they forbade it,
requiring nothing more than
random choice,
the fruit
no worse,
no better
than any other
in the garden.
~
& what was this Knowledge
of good & evil,
right & wrong
this tantalizing thing
was supposed to possess?
~
the Knowing betrayal,
no more,
nothing less.
~
a betrayal of trust
faith entrusted…,
…‘twas its quest to accuse,
we couldn’t be trusted,
it plotted, amused.
~
we stumbled upon it,
adoring the fruit
of our labors,
our labors,
would they notice
one picked?
~
we could claim ‘twas another
who laid the branch bare
they’d not know the difference,
how could they,
why care?
~
It held the thing to us,
it shrugged,
just a choice,
take it or leave it,
i don’t hear their voice
it’s a fruit same as those
in the distance allowed
i won’t even watch
i will turn,
make me proud.
~
The choice lay before us,
keep faith & obey,
or cast it behind us
their trust to betray.
the moon shone upon us,
our skin ever bare,
but we were not naked,
no, not yet,
none would care.
~
Until once we held it,
we longed for a taste,
this bittersweet treasure
we each bit….
~
…& we Knew!
~
we Knew what it meant
to break another’s trust.
we Knew what it meant
to be ashamed.
we Knew what it meant
to be naked,
the fear of being found out,
exposed.
we Knew what it meant
to break faith,
to cut ties,
betray friends.
~
our innocence was lost.
~
& we would do it again
in spite of all the pain,
sorrow,
suffering,
& grief
for what does it mean to be faithful
if one does not have a choice?
what does it mean to love
if one does not have a choice?
what does it mean to be obedient
or good
or do what is right
if one does not have a choice?
& how could we ever become
should we never Know any of this
because we never had the choice?
~
they asked us quite sternly
who told us we were naked?
they spoke harsh words,
then clothed us
& cast us forth
from this place
where Knowing was not allowed.
~
& as we walked through grass
over stones,
catching burrs
stubbing toes
tears were shed,
not by us…,
…but by them,
tears of grief,
tears of love,
grace,
& joy,
Tinged…
…with just a touch of pride
for how far we had come,
how much we had grown,
for now faith, hope & love
could be Known.
About the Creator
Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock
Retired Ordained Elder in The United Methodist Church having served for a total of 30 years in Missouri, South Dakota & Kansas.
Born in Watertown, SD on 9/26/1959. Married to Sandra Jellison-Knock on 1/24/1986. One son, Keenan, deceased.
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Comments (9)
Wonderful 👍 good work 🙏
I've always said it wasn't the fruit, but the betrayal of trust when Adam and Eve ate it. Great poem, Brother <3
Saddest day in the the history of mankind, yet God loved us so much that He provided our covering.
What we choose or not choose defines us, condemns us or liberates us! Wonderful, thought provoking poem/discourse on free will, Randy!
The fruit, the test, could we be obedient and not seek knowledge...for in tasting the fruit our eyes opened...to...what? Did the giver of the order of forbidden fruit not know that we would bite, free will and all. Enjoyed the journey here.
I appreciate this viewpoint. Amazing sermon
I had to Google burr and I didn't know that's what those things are called. Your poem was so deep. I loved it!
"for what does it mean to be faithful /if one does not have a choice?" Exactly. I loved the message that you conveyed in this poem.
Captivating poem!!!