The Gentlest of Sweet Pains
An entry for Frosted Verse

Summer's sorrow and winter's treasure,
You are the catalyst of change.
The stoic exhale of autumn,
Come to kiss our petals again.
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Ever you admire our colourful splendor,
And you weep that we must die;
But the silence of death becomes us,
Frozen innocence in our shrouded bouquet.
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Your fingers trail every line,
Outlining all you brush.
You remind the animals to hurry;
You are the nudge to stay safe and warm.
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Before the embrace of darkness,
Of slumber,
Of the end,
Your touch is the gentlest of sweet pains.
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And as we lull ourselves into winter's oblivion,
We remember we will see you soon.
When winter is done, you will paint us again,
And spring will inhale to summer's relief.
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Frost, know that you are seen,
Know that we, the flowers, understand.
And for time's eternity please caress us again,
And again.
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Linking a dear friend's poem here because if you liked this you will love Cathy's. Great minds think alike!
First published by Call Me Les on Vocal Media November 2024. All rights reserved.
Entered into the Frosted Verse Challenge.
About the Creator
Call Me Les
Aspiring etymologist and hopeless addict of children's fiction.
If I can't liberally overuse adverbs and alliteration, I'm out!
Website: lesleyleatherdale.ca
#elbowsup
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She/Her
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
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Comments (12)
Just seen this on Instagram , will listen soon π
This is beautiful π©΅π€
Breath-taking nature poem, love it!!!
I completely missed this, I am so sorry. This is an absolute frsted beauty. Wonderful words ππ
This is gorgeous. Just gorgeous. We both took on the life of a flower and the same pic. That's friggin wild. Lol
The title drew me in. A well-wrought and exceedingly lovely sentiment!
Great!! Continue your writing
Oh my, this was soooo beautifully penned! Loved your poem!
What a line: βBefore the embrace of darkness, Of slumber, Of the end, Your touch is the gentlest of sweet pains.β This was beautiful.
This is wonderful, Les. A beautiful conversation with nature, and a lovely reflection of flowers and frost.
beautiful, beautiful, love how yo personified the frost and flowers!
Awww, this is lovely use of imagery.