The Forever Ripple
* no added lag
one of these days
there will be no cutting
there will be no pieces
and no definite quantity
of neither
one of these days
i'm gonna
step right away
from that Pink Floyd lyric
one of these days
i'm gonna be able
to disassociate
to up and relocate
then precision like separate
everything
i love to hate
one of these days
i'm gonna take a piece of string
and connect it to tomorrow
i'm gonna make a little thing
and preselect the sorrow
one of these days
i'm gonna get some mend
not gonna have a lend
i'm gonna go with the curve
of the bend
i’m typed i’m hyped
i'm ripe
and i'm ready to send
one of these days
i’m gonna see my reflection
in a ripple that goes to forever
i am the pebble
i am the pond
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
Reader insights
Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
Top insights
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Comments (11)
I liked this and especially liked these lines: i'm gonna go with the curve of the bend i’m typed i’m hyped Congrats on that Top Story!! 🥳 i'm ripe
Lyrical excellence in motion!
Fabulous!!! Loved this!!!
Great poem!
You saved those last two lines, didn't you 😁 Talk about a punch 😁
Such an amazing piece of poetry. Congratulations, too, on the well-deserved Top Story recognition.
well-deserved an amazing poem with a such a lovely entry
Great Poem - Congratulations on top story. Nice Job.
Great poem!
Wow! Great poem!. Congratulations on your top story 💥✨💫
indeed...great job