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The Fall

To give your all

By Gerald HolmesPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Photo by Bhuvanesh Gupta on Unsplash

To fear the fall

But give your all

To feel the pain

But see the gain

To want for one

And only one

This is love

***

Your life you’d give

So they can live

Your very soul

For them to hold

To wake anew

And come to you

This is love

***

To feel with them

When hurt is near

To take away

All the fear

To hold a hand

And shed a tear

This is love

***

To be as this

Just you and me

To walk this path

Of love I see

Your hand in mine

Is all we’ll ever need.

This is love

***

love poems

About the Creator

Gerald Holmes

Born on the east coast of Canada. Travelled the world for my job and discovered that kindness is the most attractive feature in any human.

R.I.P. Tom Brad. Please click here to be moved by his stories.

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  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    Great job at the recent Challenge Gerald. I like your idea of the relationship taking away “the fear”. 👍

  • Novel Allen2 years ago

    All this talk of love, here there and everywhere, tis enough to make one blush. Lovely poem Gerald.

  • Test2 years ago

    This was so passionate and beautifully written Gerald! I love the rhyme scheme and repetitive language, it really helped drive your message home! This was emotionally evoking and awe inspiring! Great work!

  • So much truth in your words. Very well written and well done

  • 𝐑𝐌𝐒2 years ago

    Wow! This is incredibly beautiful and deep. Well done, Gerald!

  • Beautiful writing as always!! Fantastic use of devices

  • Test2 years ago

    So beautiful and spot on, Gerald. I love it! 😊

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Gorgeous piece. Well done, bro.

  • Awww, this is definitely love! Such a sweet poem!

  • I'd say you pretty much hit the nail on the head with this one, Gerald. Beautifully written.

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    This is love!!! Loving this!!!

  • Ashley Lima2 years ago

    Wonderful formatting. The repetition here is very powerful. Bravo

  • Test2 years ago

    Beautiful and thoughtful poem. Love it. 💙Anneliese

  • Dana Crandell2 years ago

    Another amazing love poem, Gerald. Well done!

  • Rachel Deeming2 years ago

    Simply said but deeply felt.

  • RP2 years ago

    “Your life you’d give So they can live” this is so good.

  • Lamar Wiggins2 years ago

    “Your hand in mine is all we’ll ever need.” This is a great line that sums up the simple necessities that some of us know will make us happy. Well done!

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