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The Depths Of Grief

Lasting Love

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished about a year ago 1 min read

My bones feel the ache

Searching for me, six feet deep

Only to wake up

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • John Coxabout a year ago

    This is so potent and raw that the emotion it evokes as I read it again and again is wordless anguish. The pic suggests the spirit taking flight while the flesh is trapped in this life and left behind. Visually arresting!

  • ᔕᗩᗰ ᕼᗩᖇTYabout a year ago

    Such a "Ommfph poem"... Very dynamic and well written!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    It's exhausting, isn't it?

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    I liked it Kelli.

  • Tiffany Gordonabout a year ago

    Nicely written. Poignant & profound...

  • Andrew C McDonaldabout a year ago

    That is so profound and moving. Fantastic work Kelli.

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Wow! What a sudden impact these few words gave.

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