
My bones feel the ache
Searching for me, six feet deep
Only to wake up
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions


Comments (7)
This is so potent and raw that the emotion it evokes as I read it again and again is wordless anguish. The pic suggests the spirit taking flight while the flesh is trapped in this life and left behind. Visually arresting!
Such a "Ommfph poem"... Very dynamic and well written!
It's exhausting, isn't it?
I liked it Kelli.
Nicely written. Poignant & profound...
That is so profound and moving. Fantastic work Kelli.
Wow! What a sudden impact these few words gave.